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| JennCorinthos 2007-07-20 ch 8,  | abuseThis was great... I loved it... tHIS WAS GREAT... JENNIFER |
| lovestoact 2007-01-26 ch 2, | abuseHey great story, I really love it, but I do not get why Lindsay was visting a prison? |
| Music's Fallen Angel 2006-12-25 ch 8, | abuseI loved where he kissed her in the lab in front of everyone. i could just picture it ^-^ awesome story! F.G. |
| LadeeBear 2006-06-16 ch 8, | abuseAnd all of the M&M's fans go: *sigh* Awh. Well-written and believable. I especially loved the Mac/Danny exchanges. :) Keep up the good writing! I hope to see more stories soon! |
| MeredithandDerekfanforever 2006-06-11 ch 8, | abuseI loved this story so much. Brandy |
| JacobedRose 2006-06-10 ch 8, | abuseThis is a great ending! I'm glad she trusted him. I'm also glad you were bold enough not to have them sleep together until after the wedding. I appreciate you standing up for your morals. Fishbowl, they must get really tired of everyone watching them! Great story! I can't wait till the next one! |
| wjobsessed 2006-06-10 ch 8, | abuseWow! A great ending to a great DL story. "Suddenly everything made sense..."This whole paragraph is beautifully written. Please write some more DL soon. |
| chili-peppers 2006-06-10 ch 8, | abusewow! that was amazin! loved it so much!! |
| The Little Corinthian 2006-06-10 ch 8, | abuseThat was great! I love the team's reactions, too cute :0P Great job, I look forward to reading more of your work! |
| DAnNSfreak 2006-06-09 ch 7, | abuse*Gasp* I love that last line! This is one cool story! |
| wjobsessed 2006-06-09 ch 7, | abuseI'm guessing Mac knows she was raped in the past, or maybe someone attempted to... Love the Mac/Danny conversation. |
| Moriel21 2006-06-09 ch 7, | abuseStaying tuned and waiting on pins and needles! Can't wait to read more:) I like this story...well done! |
| Axellia 2006-06-09 ch 7, | abuseOh, I love this. It's so sweet, and Mac is a real father figure - although I can't help but wonder what he'd actually be like if he had kids. 'If you don’t know what it is, then how do you know you’re not experiencing it' - Well done Mac! Please update soon, I'm really enjoying this, and I want to see a happy ending for Danny and Lindsay with kisses and cake, and all things squichy and romantic... I'm sorry... it's been a long day. |
| icydroplets 2006-06-09 ch 7, | abuseVery well written- I just loved the exchange between Mac and Danny. I felt as though I could see this on the show. I can't wait to see what happens next! |
| JacobedRose 2006-06-09 ch 7, | abuseVery good chapter! Everybody going to Mac for advice is great, he's good at it! So I'm guessing there's a conversation in their future. Please update soon! |