it was great

okay for the most part your grammer is great. your diction is excellent but your spelling is terrable. would you like me too look at this story too?

Yay! They finally got together! Luke and Lorelai make such a good couple!

Good job this was a really good story!

What is the name of the sequel going to be??

*Caitlyn*

in the prologue, you made the fight seem so casual. Like it was all Lorelai's fault and not Lukes. Luke is a responsible person and would have talked to Lorelai about their problems, not just casualy dismissed them like it was all her fault, other than that great story.

epilogue and a sequel

Ok, while I loved this story -- I thought you wrapped it up too quickly. Slow things down a bit -- it will make the readers more apt to want more. Go for the sequel! Great Job though!

yes! They finally got together! You should DEFINATELY write a sequel!

You should definately do a sequel. Starting from their wedding. great job:)

i love it and well it had a really good ending so and epilogue would be good because of the ending wait no a sequal defentily do a sequal!

good, but short,
i cant relly decide against one or the other..

Love it. You should write a sequel.

so good. so cute. so perfect.

UPDATE ASAP I LOVE THE STORY!

i love it and whichever one will be longer which will probably be a sequal so ya and write more soon!