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Reviews For: After the Blast

lemmingduck
2007-02-03
ch 7,
abuseI loved loved loved this story.. and all your flack/lindsay stories, I would love thoes two to be together. :) I hope you write more soon.
Adamsgirl
2006-06-08
ch 1,
abusewow hta twas great! :D a few spelling errors but in all this rocked! :D I LOVED the part where Don gives her a chair instead of just grabbing the stuff for her. I could see Don doing that for er.

nice job. :D
chili-peppers
2006-06-08
ch 1,
abusewow great so far! love it!! well done
suburbs
2006-06-07
ch 1,
abuseI enjoyed your story. Normally I have trouble with this pairing, but I enjoyed the character development and motivation. The height angle was cute. The story could use a little editing - mostly things that spell check would not catch (like your where it should be you're, too instead of two and a few places where additional punctuation would be helpful for sentence flow). If you ever want a beta let me know.
Alyssa C
2006-06-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseAnother FM Radio fic! I loved it! The fluff and angst worked nice together! Plus, it was long, which is a nice added bonus!
Please write a sequal. The ending was so sweet. And a cliffhanger of sorts. lol! I hope you write more fm fics soon!
jeffandjimmieschick
2006-06-07
ch 1,
abusePLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY IMMEDIATELY! THIS IS SO AWESOME! I LUV LUV HOW U CAPTURED THEIR GROWING FEELINGS AND U REALLY BROUGHT THEIR THOUGHTS TO LIFE!

EXCELLENT, EXCELLENT STORY!

HURRY UP AND UD WHAT R U STILL READIN THIS 4!
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