|Reviews for What Went Wrong?|
| paramore 10/4/08 . chapter 1
aw i love it so cut u should rite more from Saphira
| Chocofreakazoid 3/5/08 . chapter 1
this is really sweet. good job :)
| cheapxperfume 1/19/08 . chapter 1
this was good. ]
it sounded like an excerpt from Eragon or Eldest, that's how well you nailed Saphira's voice.
| Fallen Dragonfly 1/14/07 . chapter 1
Very well written Emerald.
So much feeling woven in those few moments.
(And if i had my books with me right now, I'd praise you in the ancient language too.)
| happyperson 10/26/06 . chapter 1
oh nice. nice work. i like!
| LadyLapisLazuli 9/5/06 . chapter 1
Great story! You are a very good writer!
| J.S. Mews 8/29/06 . chapter 1
I liked it. It sounded like Saphira was actually saying this.
| The Midnights Sun 8/15/06 . chapter 1
Wow. I love it
| The Archiver 8/1/06 . chapter 1
see this is why i come here for more of wat saphira feels why cant more people write stories in her POV. keep up saphira stories and ill keep reading them.
| Nelarun 7/6/06 . chapter 1
That was so sad! I totally agreed! well done!
Nelarun of Australia
| callernumber16onz100 6/17/06 . chapter 1
I liked it. I'm definitely adding you to my Favorite Author and Author Alert list!
| Rinoa120 6/12/06 . chapter 1
it was so pasinernt pleas right more as to what aray was thinking when it happened it was so ... i dont have the words to explain it (smiles) from a friend J
| Shurtugal jonathan 6/8/06 . chapter 1
that is very good.
| InvisibleAndDumb 6/8/06 . chapter 1
This is good! Are you going to continue? Even if there's not much to continue on I think you should...
| AK 6/8/06 . chapter 1
cld be interesting. Update soon.