aw i love it so cut u should rite more from Saphira

this is really sweet. good job :)

-Chocofreakazoid

this was good. ]

it sounded like an excerpt from Eragon or Eldest, that's how well you nailed Saphira's voice.

Very well written Emerald.

So much feeling woven in those few moments.

(And if i had my books with me right now, I'd praise you in the ancient language too.)

oh nice. nice work. i like!

Great story! You are a very good writer!

I liked it. It sounded like Saphira was actually saying this.

Wow. I love it

see this is why i come here for more of wat saphira feels why cant more people write stories in her POV. keep up saphira stories and ill keep reading them.

That was so sad! I totally agreed! well done!

Nelarun of Australia

I liked it. I'm definitely adding you to my Favorite Author and Author Alert list!

it was so pasinernt pleas right more as to what aray was thinking when it happened it was so ... i dont have the words to explain it (smiles) from a friend J

that is very good.

This is good! Are you going to continue? Even if there's not much to continue on I think you should...

cld be interesting. Update soon.