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Adelaide MacGregor
2008-06-24
ch 1,
abuseExcellent job, wonderfully done.
tealight
2008-06-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis story was amazing. I think this is the best word to describe it, because I have never read a story this beautifully written for a very long time. I just recently discovered the Hinamori-Hitsugaya pairing, but I think that with this fanfiction it's settled, it's one of my truly favorite pairings. Arigatou for writing such a good story.
katana sohma-demon girl
2008-05-23
ch 1,
abuseThis was beautiful...so much so that it brought some tears. It might've been the song I was listening to...or because of the way you worded every emotion, every paragraph and sentence in explicit and wonderful detail. I'm delighted to have discovered this magnificent piece of fiction tonight-something I never would've been able to capture, even if I tried.
Amazing story and thank you for creating it on my favorite couple in Bleach.
unionsagittarius
2008-05-01
ch 1,
abuseAw,it was so sweet!I love HitsuHina!Amazing fanfic,one of the greateset I've ever read!I was a bit surprised with Hinamori but I really liked it!
yellowis4happy
2008-04-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseSweet. But I'm slightly confused. I read somewhere that Momo was Hitsugaya's older sister, but is that true? Because if not for that, I would have enjoyed this so much more. I really would love this pairing if only I knew for certain.
ichigosmoothie
2008-04-05
ch 1,
abuseThis... is absouletly, heart-wrenchingly, amazing. The way you wrote this drew me in from the very start and I honestly lost track of how many times I had to find a tissue because my tears were clouding the computer screen.

Amazing.
wedelin-gisela
2008-03-31
ch 1,
abusei'm not a fan of lemons...i'm a old fashion type of girl...but this story was beautiful!
the characters are perfectly protrayed and the feeling are so real. the lemon itself (i especially liked how you didn't use downright crude and sexual words - i'm not going to elaborate, but i hope you get my meaning...*nervous laugh*) was beautiful - loving, sweet and with just the right amount of heat to make the longing between both characters so much more meaningful.
the story was bittersweet, with enough angst and hurt it he beginning to make the happy ending that much more sweeter.

i loved this story! i haven't read to many lemon stories in this site to compare, but i've read enough romance novels to say that this is among the best romance minin story ever...:)

just beautiful, darlin!
Solosan
2008-03-22
ch 1,
abuseHmn...

*hiccup* I just... *snivel* It was so... *tear gushing*

So BEAUTIFUL!

Man I love your writing... Yah know? Besides I absolutedly LOVE Hitsugaya so there goes my bonus~~

JJ
MissMinnie08
2008-02-16
ch 3,
abuseOh this was just a beautiful mini fic. I've just recently got into Bleach and it's been even less time since I've liked HitsuHina. I've tried looking for fics for this couple, but I haven't like what I read. To me, there are so many out there that just make them so OC. But I really like this, they seem a lot more in character than the ones I've read...and the lemon was a bonus. Thanks for that, I like how you made it beautiful and meaningful instead of crude and dirty. Anyways, just wanted to show this fic some lovin too ^_^
TheaBlackthorn
2008-02-13
ch 3,
abuseThat was really great i love these two there so sweet together!
CallMeNicole
2008-02-05
ch 3,
abusethis is one of the best lemons out there!
Et3rn4l D4rkn3ss
2008-02-04
ch 1,
abuseur an awesome writer! i luv ur style
keep up the awesome work~
Imogen Maine
2008-01-27
ch 1,
abuseloved it.
The Great Naxa
2007-12-12
ch 3,
abuseWow, that was so good. I love HitsuHina so much! Very good, keep it up. :]
NejiHinaHitsuHinaFanatic
2007-12-08
ch 1,
abuseReally good story! I loved it! HitsuHina forever!! I just had to fav it!
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