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Reviews For: Sleeping Sun

Steve Jester
2008-03-02
ch 1,
abuseSleeping Sun... I don't remember a cello part in that song. Is Shinji covering Tarja's melody?

Anyway, great story! I love it!

Steve Jester
King of Darkness
2007-05-29
ch 1,
abuseYou know, this is probably the greatest Shinji/Hikari I've ever read. Good job, pat yourself on the back!
Mizamour
2006-07-03
ch 1,
abuseBeautifully written! S/H isn't written too often, and you pulled it off well!
Master Zero Raid
2006-07-01
ch 1,
abusei really like this story. it has a really good feel to it. i plan on reading this story in the future. keep up the good work
Frost-EVA-04
2006-06-16
ch 1,
abuseMan this is an excellent piece. I like your writing style. I'm more of an A/S my self but this is really good. Keep it up. Frost out.
That Other Guy
2006-06-15
ch 1,
abuseI've gotta say that I greatly enjoyed prereading this one, you were dead on when you said that this one was right up my alley. I'm glad to see that this one finally made its way online, and I'm kinda ** that Scout didn't get around to prereading this sooner. Can't really blame her though; she DOES have a lot of work on her plate...so do I really...Hououza and Kraven Ergeist would fight for my head if they knew how long it's been since I've worked on their stuff...I should probably get on that now...

See ya,

That Other Guy
Spinereader
2006-06-09
ch 1,
abuseWhat a moving and tender love story. It has to be one of the only stories with death followed closely by a new relationship didn't seem clique and insulting to the deceased. It all felt so natural and right, all the while remaining in character. I actually wavted them to get together, and didn't feel guilty about it due to the way Touji's death was portrayed. It was obvious they missed him and cared about him. It is also obvious Shinji wasn't just the rebound boy, as is often the case in fiction. All in all the relationship was handled in a very tender and respectful manner. Though I'll agree with the other reviewer who said that the Three Words (I love you) may have come a little fast, at least on Shinji's part.

The line about Hikari having nowhere to go on Saterday made me wonder. Are you aware Japanese students have (IIRC) half day school days on Saterdays, or was Hikari cutting?

I didn't know Sleeping Sun was a Nightwish song until the very end. (Obviously I didn't look at your user name when I clicked on the story.) I thought I'd heard just about all their songs but apparently you hit on one I haven't. Further proof that I need to nag myself to buy their album. I keep forgetting.
dennisud
2006-06-08
ch 1,
abuseNice one one of the few that celebrate Shinji & hikari.

I suggest checking out Nightwish's new music and get inspired even more!

dennisud
Genesis D. Rose
2006-06-08
ch 1,
abuseAwesome story bro, a littl;e rushed I think you should split it into two seperate chapters and extend them both so you can let their felling grow a little more before the whole I love you thing.

Other than that GREAT fic and well done
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