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| karissa-4eva 2007-08-02 ch 1,  | abusehi cathy i love this story... is this the one that u were working on when we went camping and i was trying to turn it in to a "uh'hum" well ya ill ttyl bye bye Karissa |
| xox.Kristyy 2007-07-29 ch 5, | abuseHeyy! Plz update! I luv it!! I would recommend giving Kagome Peptobismo(sp?) u kno dat pink medicine ..so..lol! so bye!^^ |
| xox.Kristyy 2007-07-28 ch 3, | abuseLuv it! Plz update!! ^^ |
| xiDOREyoux and CrimsonTears 2007-06-14 ch 5, | abuseI like how IY is so cute and stuff but I think you are repeating too much hings and Kagome's not that much of a kid? But update! more fluff between the two loves~!^^ch.5 |
| xiDOREyoux and CrimsonTears 2007-06-14 ch 3, | abuseto be honest, she complains WAY too much. Kagome doesn't complain that much.=/ |
| Lexi 2007-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseTake this as a constructive crit, not a flame because that was what it was meant to be. I'd suggest you get a beta reader, someone to help you with spelling, grammer and make suggestions BEFORE you post,or at least putting it in word and spell checking. "Thanx" is not a word, its gets very old seeing it over and over. I do like the concept of your story, Inu's sweet side isn't something we see to much. |
| koolio9999lover 2007-06-09 ch 3, anon. | abusek im gonna be a flamer and say this was the worst fanfic i've ever read! |
| koolio9999lover 2007-06-09 ch 1, anon. | abusesame things happen this is boring but oh well |
| Princessofdarknesshiei'sgir... 2007-06-07 ch 4, | abuseHey great story please update soon |
| inuyashafan 2006-11-13 ch 4, anon. | abuseOk... you used the word sweetly to replace said 10, thats right a thumping 10 times. its a little repetitive, try to vary the words you use. And they are entirely to happy. either they are saying something sweetly, or they are smiling at each other. You need a little variation when it comes to writing good stories. apart from that, good job, good advancements in the story line. |
| the_power_of_love 2006-11-13 ch 4, anon. | abusewow loved it realy sweet loved it |
| sugerplumfairy17 2006-11-13 ch 4, | abusehey i am glad to see that you have updated! i really like your story!! please update again soon! |
| Sessho's Gal 2006-11-13 ch 4, | abusewow what another great chapter |
| Sessho's Gal 2006-11-13 ch 3, | abuseahh he is so sweet |
| Sessho's Gal 2006-11-13 ch 1, | abuseAHH sweet Inuyasha |