great story enven if it doesn't tak into account what happened in the series due to the date it was written!
I was a bit bothered by the Seeley and Temperance thing but at the end I got used to it!

Awesome!

I just found your story and I have a bone to pick with you. I'm suppose to be cleaning yet I can't stop reading this! The dust bunnies are just going to have to wait. I can't believe how good this story is. You've done a grat job and I can't wait to finish it. Thank you so much for all the hard work you put into this. You are an amazingly talented writer Congratulations!

The entire story brought tears to my eyes, it as so sweet and awesomly described! Just the right touch of drama, happiness and uh... how do I put this... scenes between the two of them. It wasn't all Rated M or patheticly cute, it was absoluly, perfect and I want to thank you a thousand times over and everything. I don't think I've read a story this well written and amazing on this site and I've read a TON of stuff (About 27 stories a day) Keep writing, you're amazing, seriously! Anyone who says otherwise is mentally retarded and can't read anyway. AMAZING!

Too sweet, not sappy sweet, just heartwarming sweet.

Great story, really enjoyed it. Thank you.

aw... so good! i loved it so much.

“Seeley, let’s go home.” Yeah!

It's so nice watching them tease each other, both knowing where they'll end up, both wanting to go there, and yet holding out for the payoff.

Swimsuits! WooHoo!

... he was approaching the fridge when he stopped, drawing an invisible gun he pretended to shoot it before cautiously reaching for the handle...

“Did you kill it Booth?”

LOL! You do such a nice job of showing their playful sides!

“Shortly after I met you.” ...

“Booth, that was a nightmare, not a dream ..."

I had to laugh at that! Great beginning. I've read on further but just now gotten to a computer to let you know. So, when is Booth going to let her in on what his last dream was?

I gotta say, as much as i like the 1st ten chappies of your story, i glad you've got a plot going on that isnt just them hooking up. makes a much better story.

im loving it!

Interesting chapter, showing the evolution of the characters as time goes on - something I'd like to see in the Bath series as well to tell the truth although that seems to be building up well in the current chapters of that work...

One problem I'm personally having is figuring exactly where in the series your work is set...

Also you used taunt instead of taut in this chapter I believe, but I'm also somewhat sleep deprived so I can't tell you exactly where.

point of interest- just as an autopsy on an animal is a necropsy, aerodynamics in water aquadynamics :) i have a funny feeling that bones would pick up on that and correct him lol.

otherwise, neat story :)