cute. :)

completely love it! it's so great not to read something with all that "and-then-he-was-revived-and-came-after-her" stuff. this was so refreshing and lovely and put a smile on my cranky uni-student face.
thanks a lot!
pol xo

excellent as usual. nice twist

I did actually read it at LJ first. ;) But here I am, replying here! Odd.

This was lovely. I'm not just saying it for the sake of saying it, either- your I/M stories have such great chemistry. I simply love how you write Marcus! Ach, thanks so much for this- a bright patch in my muddy life. You should post it at cole_ivanova. [grins]

short, swwet, and 'revive' free... i like! ^_~ and the little cliffy at the end was a perfect way to end the story! more? ^_^

~HIKARi

Damn - accomplished without the word revive... You're good woman! And once again the poor reader is left hanging by her fingernails from a treacherous cliff... Are you vowing not to do a sequel or would you consider it?

This is a very cute story! It's one of the sweetest that I've read about them. Can we expect a sequel to this one? Please?

Oh, I like it! It so could have happenned. There's a few typing mistakes you may want to change on a read through.