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| chelsea 2008-01-13 ch 1, anon. | abusecould you please please please put a warning about abortion next time and FYI sara would never get an abortion D: |
| Kateri Bear 2007-09-13 ch 1,  | abuseI like your writing but they're out of character... Sara loves life too much to get an abortion and I don't think Grissom would allow her to. But it is good. |
| all things must end. 2006-06-16 ch 3, | abuseThis is out of character and . . . really weird. So an abortion makes you want to have rough sex? Weird, man. |
| odeepblue 2006-06-16 ch 3, | abuseit was beautiful ;) i loved it... totally gorgeous... really well done ! thank you for what you said about me, it really means a lot to me that my ideas actually helped you ! thanks ;) |
| lisab1986 2006-06-16 ch 3, | abuseThat was perfect - everything in this story was completely in character, and I really love how you wrote it!! Awesome work - I'm off to read more of your work! |
| IrishDrifter 2006-06-15 ch 1, | abuseForgive me for being an ignorant country fool but did Sara have an abortion? |
| lisab1986 2006-06-12 ch 2, | abuseWow, this is awesome!! This is the first fic I've read when Sara and Griss decide not to have the baby, and your writing is great! I honestly don't think that this scenario would be OOC at this point in their lives, and I'm thrilled that someone else agrees and is writing a fic about it! More chapters, please!! I love how you've written Griss and how sensitive he's being - I want one of him, lol! |
| odeepblue 2006-06-10 ch 2, | abusebeautiful, although him been rough sounds really good too, so i know where sara is coming from, lol... like always i loved the chapter ;) please update soon ! |
| jtbwriter 2006-06-10 ch 2, | abuseThat was good-very interesting how Grissom views making love-and his love for Sara is so strong and fierce, I think Sara finally got it. Thanks for a great update-now Gris knows he makes her happy and satisfies her! Very sweet! Now what?:) |
| lola 2006-06-10 ch 2, anon. | abuseI'm believe in women's right to choose. But I don't think that Sara would abord the child of the man she loves so much. This is OOC. |
| violet4now 2006-06-10 ch 2, | abuseOK, so I'm not pro life or anything but, I don't think that Sara would kill her Baby. She's sees death every day and I think It would bother her to kill somthing. But I applaud you for your effort! |
| SSfanatic 2006-06-10 ch 1, | abuseI'm really enjoying this story. Although Sara said in Unfriendly Skies that she would never take a life, she also believes that women have the right to choose what to do with their bodies, and it is true that it still wasn't a person, it was cells, so I don't think this is off character. It would be off character if she didn't tell Grissom about it. I loved the second chapter (loved protective Grissom). Keep up the good work and update soon. |
| Inara Cabot 2006-06-09 ch 1, | abuseaw, i thought we might get a baby! too bad, cant wiat to see where you take this, if your going tot ake it anywhere at all! (smile) |
| justine 2006-06-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery off character. Remember in Unfriendly Skies that Sara said that she couldn't take another's life. I really can't see her having an abortion. |
| SGBS4L 2006-06-08 ch 1, | abuseDamn that was great..so real plz keep going |