Whoa this is a great 'Keitaro flips out fic' though I am not familiar with this 'Cracker' series but nevertheless this is pretty good. I hope you're not going to abandon this and yeah anyone with half a braincell can tell Keitaro and Naru's marriage will end in divorce sooner or later even someone like Keitaro has to come to his senses sooner or later...one way or the other.

This is a great fic and I love the premise to it after all the crap Keitaro has been through its not surprising he's turned out this way.

I'm surprised Keitaro and Naru's marriage lasted as long as it did considering Naru still never listens to Keitaro and still insists on abusing him.

Plus its doubtful the poor man even knows who he is after becoming a copy of Seta for all intents and purposes and not being allowed to be himself.

Oh and some advice for Ruto Kuntai...GROW UP! Do you honestly think GlazedandConfused will stop this fic simply because you tell him the fics crap!? And you are so conceited in thinking your opinion is so important that GlazedandConfused will actually listen and take down this fic. Grow up! If you actually READ the fic you will UNDERSTAND just WHY Keitaro is like this!

Don't listen to that moron's comments please continue this fic, buddy! ^_~

Too dark man, you can't really expect a person to enjoy a fanfiction with to much darkness and randoness. Crossovers are better left to action and adventure work. Also, Keitaro would never be racist or carry any weapon, so that is too far fetched.

Better luck next time

Well, the moment he left the shop for the 10 yen I thought "Hey, I know this..." lol, Cracker...
I remember Robert Carlyle as the "skinhead", brilliant actor... but getting back to this fiction, I don't really see yet how it's different from the Cracker episode. I admit, I don't remember all the details, but it looks like you're pretty much sticking to the Cracker plot line. I hope you add a unique twist, otherwise it's just Cracker with anime characters... not all that interesting if you've seen the TV series.
Also, you should perhaps go more into the way Keitaro feels, you sort of sum it all up at the end of chapter 2.
Sorry, I don't mean to be too critical, I think it's a good start and it's well written. I'm sure I'll be proven wrong in the next chapters! Adding NGE and Love Hina to the mix ought to shake the original plot up a bit, whatever happens...

Good luck with the next chapters.

wow, an actually GOOD Keitaro snaps story. I've only read, like, two of these. The police officers and the three other people kinda make it confusing to people who don't know them (me), but I'll get used to it. Please keep going.

If my review from earlier doesnt make it, I just want you to know that I wrote a long and hopefully helpful review, doing my best to give advice where I thought it was needed...

Then I lost it all when I sent it. F*ing review sender...

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This is great, an interesting characterisation of Keitaro and everyone else. You've added psychological richness to this story and it does have a Cracker feel.

Man, what a strange history! Keitaro acting as a skinhead, some drops of NGE characters getting drunk... I really want to know how this story will end!! Go ahead, man!

This is great! A very interesting characterisation of Keitaro after 5 years of not being able to be himself and most likely more abuse from Naru combined with the recent passing of Granny Hina well...how can I describe it?