Wow, this has to be the least imagineable pairing in this game... but you write it very well. Very few people focus on Folon anyway, and he deserves a bit of thought...

yeah, you're right, different. but yet it fits. It was a very goo surprise to see a new chapter of this come up!^^

A very real and accurate portrayel of Folon's state of mind. Great job. update soon.

Soyo: ^.^ Ah...i enjoy.
Sayo: ...
Soyo: You gonna write more? Or am i left hanging like in so many Fan ficts?

Really cool. Well, if you write more, I'll definitely pop by a read and review!^^
I really love what you've built, and your take on both their characters, especially Folon, as we know so very little about him...

This one has to be my favourite so far. Loved it to death!

Really dark this time, but it's true that no one really knows how Folon would really act and react...

Darker, yet it's still really good!^^

Quite an original pairing you've got there! I must say I was surprised and intrigued upon reading the summary! I'm glad I opened the link!^^