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angeleyenc
2009-03-01 . chapter 1
that was so cute! i loved it!
Von
2008-03-11 . chapter 1
This was great!

I was a bit worried when I started reading - for that precise reason. I am so SICK of Mary-Sue little sisters, cousins etc.

A klutzy 'normal' cousin was so refreshing!
ein dwang
2008-02-05 . chapter 1
That was such a fun read, I'm just sorry I didn't find this fic sooner. I could definitely see Dean doing this and the stare of death is so totally canon. This was a nice OFC that wasn't overbearing and the rapport you built between Dean and Beth enhanced the overall storyline. I'm most likely over-analyzing this, but I tend to do that when I really love a fic. Anywho, thanks for the enjoyable read.
Rhoswen19
2007-06-19 . chapter 1
I loved the story! Really funny I never thought I would read about a clumsy Winchester.
hermione169242
2007-01-20 . chapter 1
this was really cute...i can totally see dean acting like that too! and poor dean getting kicked in...well you know! LOL!
good story
hotforjensen101
2006-07-11 . chapter 1
Very cute and sweet i like it.
Mishka89
2006-06-13 . chapter 1
LOL! That was great. Go Dean with the protective cousin thing down pat. I like Beth, she's a cutie pie. Poor Dean having to teach her self denfense lessons though. Great story ;)
JaggerK
2006-06-11 . chapter 1
That was very different and funny. Greatly enjoyed it.
HYPERLITE.HO
2006-06-08 . chapter 1
ooh I really loved it and I hope you write a sequel or more stories wiht Beth. I love the terms you used for Dean it reminded me of my brother.
TangledPencils
2006-06-08 . chapter 1
Good story, well done.
Thru Terry's Eyes
2006-06-08 . chapter 1
That was cute! I loved the failed 'lesson'
Ghostwriter
2006-06-08 . chapter 1
Yeah. That was great. I sympathized with Dean at one point. Gettin' hit THERE would hurt whether you're a guy or a girl. But especially if you're a guy since they have a certain piece of anatomy that girls don't. Awesome job. Catch ya on the flip side.
fairytalemanipulator
2006-06-08 . chapter 1
HA! That was a good one! I love stories like these, great job!
darkdestiney2000
2006-06-08 . chapter 1
That was so cute...I love that she was clumsy and hurt Dean...lol
Ghostdraconi
2006-06-08 . chapter 1
I like this, Beth came across as a normal kid and her interaction with Dead was fun. Good Job.
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