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| Manic-Cheese-Fairy 2006-12-19 ch 8,  | abuse1. Yes course there will lol 2.Brain damage after hitting her head hard in the car crash 3.More as a friend i think 4.This is so good lol its really funny! |
| thegreatbluespoon 2006-10-24 ch 8, | abuseSeriously, you are killing me with these hangers! |
| Daisyangel 2006-10-24 ch 8, | abuseI'm sorry for the way my first review came off. My guess for the next chapter is that she is killed? Maybe by a car hitting her or getting in an accident? |
| Marmel C.c. 2006-10-24 ch 8, | abusethe last thing he would hear her say?. That doesn't sound well...I liked this chapter though, I just hope they can finish their business with their boyfirend/girlfriend so they can be together. I'm sorry, Im just Sandle all the way;);)Upadte soon, really good chapter! {MAR} |
| H0neyFly 2006-10-24 ch 7, | abuseMORE MORE MORE PLEASE! My G-O-D. i love this story. you rock. luv ya. Hope to hear more of you |
| Daisyangel 2006-10-23 ch 7, | abuseYour story is some what confusing and having the chapters be so vague is kinda annoying. Also you have several grammatical errors that make the story difficult to read. I like the story line, but I don't like the idea of having to guess and tet the right answer in order for you to update. I don't believe that should be a requirement to recieve an update. Aslo you tend to use the word off a lot when you probably mean of, and you use the word too in places that it doesn't belong. Please take this as constructive criticism and not flames, please. I do like the plot of the story. |
| Marmel C.c. 2006-10-23 ch 7, | abuseI've just read up to the 6th chapter, cause I didn't know how to put a review by the last time you updated XD XD. I liked this so far,, I hate GSR though, but I think I'll be able to handle for the time being :D:D. Update soon!! Can't wait 4 more!! {MAR} |
| ObessedTWFan 2006-10-23 ch 7, | abuseI think she'll chicken out at the last minute and say something else instead. Chapter was great. |
| thegreatbluespoon 2006-10-20 ch 6, | abuseI really like it so far. Its almost like a soap opera. I really really really hope that u find your notebook so we can have more of this! |
| I never promised 2006-08-18 ch 1, | abuseOH MY i think someone has a baby... |
| Carrie 2006-07-01 ch 5, anon. | abuseNO! I think Greg and Judy should breakup. Yeah I guess you put a little in like when judy told Greg ’You know I can kill you tight now, don’t you?’ That was kind of funny because well Judy sounded a little like she understood Greg and what had happend so it was kinda funny when she said because we knew she didnt mean it. Anyway please continue writing. Carrie* |
| csiwolfe08 2006-06-24 ch 5, | abuseInteresting so far. I think Greg and Sara should forget about the others and get together themselves. Good job, update soon! |
| angelofstresss 2006-06-13 ch 5, | abuseThis story is going to be a sandles, pairing right? Happily Ever After for greg/Sara. Thought would be funny if Greg came to work with a black eye. |
| I never promised 2006-06-09 ch 4, | abuseYour a great writter but i find you chapters really short :( I think...A but then she will break up with him this way Sara and Greg will be together, and also well i change my mind Prolly D but i kinda hope she will take it A...I don;t know lol |
| Leigh 2006-06-09 ch 3, anon. | abuseAt first i didn't like whta was going on. Why, i dono. but now i think it's rather intresting. can't wait for more |