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Delka 2006-09-01 ch 2,	abuseEnjoyable. Thanks!
Abby Ebon 2006-08-31 ch 2,	abuseDon't worry your more then forgiven for the lateness, lol. Man eating sting rays- Atlantis's oceans full of ancient creatures modern men don't know about. You know this is a good reason to have a paleontologist...Oh wait. I don't think they have one. Uh-Oh. A week of being paralized for our poor Major, think of all the things that could go wrong! Wraith attacks, random Ancient apperances (for a 'people' who aren't suposed to be involved with 'lower lifeforms' they sure do pop up a lot, eh?), and worse -Rodney and Ford pranks! Oh poor Atlantis...I almost pity it.
Stealth Dragon 2006-08-31 ch 2,	abuseWhatever happens, it should involve Sheppard getting revenge on Rodney. You could always drag it out a little more. Have some kind of adverse reaction to being stung. Or, perhaps, have someone, maybe Kavenaugh, try to pull some mean prank on John, a really nasty, mean prank that ends up not being very funny. Really this is a story with all kinds of potential. You should consider all possible directions it could go, and go nuts with it.
Jules47 2006-08-30 ch 2,	abusethat was pretty mean of Rodney tacking that picture up for Sheppard to see when he's awake. It's the stuff of nightmares and I'm sure he'll be having a few, unfortunately he can't tell anyone and he can't move to get away from them either. The poor guy is really going to suffer until the paralysis wears off then Rodney had better watch out.
Bookgirl82 2006-06-18 ch 1,	abuseI'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Poor Sheppard, he can't do anything without ending up in the infirmary.
Abby Ebon 2006-06-12 ch 1,	abuseSweet! Eh I love this totally cute that Carson is 'happy' that John can't move around and has to wait till he's better. That Jellyfish might actually have some future use in keeping a Wraith in temporary paralysis - or something if Carson can isolate it which I think he'll do. Though I thought it was rather careless of John to surfing without any real thought of danger- though come to think of it is actually quite like him. grins Anyway good work! Update soon- yes? Please? By the ay thanks a bunch for all the awesome reviews you've left me in the past- you'll probably never know how much thay've helped me sort of some of my wilder ideas! Grins
Stealth Dragon 2006-06-08 ch 1,	abuseIS there more? I'm most curious to see where you take this.
Jules47 2006-06-08 ch 1,	abusegood start to the story, I loved the heoric Rodney and an injured Sheppard. Poor Sheppard stuck in the infirmary paralysed, I'm sure he's in for a difficult time of it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Elizabeth Bartlett 2006-06-08 ch 1,	abusecool story so far. Are we going to learn what happened to Carson? (a surfing accident perhaps?)
SeagullMan 2006-06-08 ch 1,	abuseHehe Nice, I imagined that the needed a surf. SeagullMan

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