well im interested, please continue. Well-written.

Ok, so I'm hooked. More please

Very intriguing beginning. What could they have done to screw things up? Waiting with bated breath for the next chapter.

One of the best stories I have read! Keep it up I hope to see what will turn out.

Okay, I'm intrigued! ;-) Can't wait to see what happens next...

oohh nice.

I really wat to see where this goes!

No one wants to sit by Jack? That's so sad. I wonder what this little meeting is about.

I liked your little change from what really happened on the show but it's hard to imagine that Sam's hardly there.

intriguing start. more please

Why do I have a bad feeling about this?

When someone says "we did what we thought was best." it usually means that what they did was to screw up something or it cost more than anticipated or worth it.

When's the next update?