cute please contiue ^_^

You should so continue this.
8D

You just have to continue this. D;
I wanna see what happens.
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I really like this and it could develope into something immensly interesting should you chose to continue.

Very good so far.

I really have no idea about the slash. Reno seems too much of a womanizer to me... but hey. I'd love to see how you do it.

You should definately continue this and put a little yaoi in it as well. :)

Please continue this...it has promise...^_^

E.

I think I've said before that I don't generally read slash-(don't have anything against, just don't for the same reason I don't read a lot of stories from the male point of view; I find it a little hard to get into the character's 'head')-but for you I was willing to try anything.

And it paid off! **hugs** How have you been?

Oh! I haven’t seen any new material from you for a while! Very good, but would we really expect any less from a respectable writer such as yourself? I think not!
It’s probably been said a fair few times before, but I really love the way your writing flows.
It’ll be interesting to see how you develop the relationship between these two. They’re both pretty intense characters, and methinks sparks shall fly.
Anyway, keep writing, so I can keep reading! You’re work is really inspirational, and I probably should have commented before now… ahh well.

I've very much enjoyed it so far, please update soon!

Very good start. Depending on how the yaoi is written, I will probably continue reading this story.
One tiny little thing that I could probably just chalk up to writer's discretion, but Kadaj uses a double bladed katanna, not a gun blade.

please update.. i liked it so much!

The content of the story is well written, but the strongest aspect of the fic I think would be the believable dialogue.
Quite honestly, though, I'm hoping it doesn't turn into slash :)