Funny to the point of falling off my bed. I've read all of your fics you put up on lambotricks and this is my fav. In fact I think you're my fav TF fanfic writer style and content wise.

Somehow it has a very 'domestic' feel to it, to me anyway. Can't help but feel that the Autobots are literally a family (comprising predominatly delinquent brothers) with Prime as the father figure and Prowl and the officers as the elder brothers that need to watch out for the younger ones.

Scene with Blades on the tower, priceless. And the twins inevitably get sucked into it as well. Excellent. And that lovely drive over to Blades reminds me of long car rides with the family. Kids bickering, older siblings irritated and dad pissed off as Hell shouting for order.

Please keep them coming!

Fantastic. Absolutely fantastic.

I can just see Jazz snickering in the corner as all of this going on. It makes me snicker a bit just thinking about it. :P

Jazz, you sneaky little bastard. They know Jazz did it but can't actually pin anything on him. I always did respect Jazz's thoroughness.

::FLAILS WILDLY:: LOVE! LOVE! LOVE OUT THE WAZOO! I LOVE YOUR TWINS, I LOVE YOUR PRIME (AND I HATE PRIME), I LOVE YOUR JAZZ AND YOUR AEIRALBOTS AND YOUR HOTSPOT (WHATEVER THE SLAG A HOTSPOT IS) AND YOUR PROWL AND ANYONE ELSE I MAY HAVE MISSED. I LOVE YOU IN A WAY ONLY CAPS-LOCK CAN EXPRESS. I LOVE YOUR TIMING AND YOUR DESCRIPTIONS. I LOVE YOUR STORY AND YOUR STYLE.

Jazz was the mastermind wasn't he? lol

BWAHAHAHAHA!

I love Jazz! I suspected he had a hand in all this all along.

I dunno what was funnier, though - their predicament, or the fact that everyone in Portland took it in stride. :)

This. Was. Awesome. I love it when they swear at each other...though Sunny's choice remarks about the police bordered on the malicious...granted he was behind bars but gyah! However I think Prowl and Co. are well on their way to teaching his smart mouth some manners...

...and Jazz...evil, evil Jazz...XD

I ended up reading this one on your lambo site. .

I'm at work right now. I work in an office as a gopher for high-maintenance attorneys who get a vague kick out of making me run around and getting the things they find mundane, finished. How mature do you think it makes me look when I'm reading Transfics on my breaks and laughing my ass off?

And I swear to god, Sideswipe and Sunstreaker reminded me of me and my sister. Not JUST because we're twins, but because she'll talk her mouth off and I'll be right next to her howling and giggling until my throat's sore from choking on my own spit.

You are now my favorite fanfiction author. Ever. My sides hurt.

Heh, silver lining. Jazz, the ever-looking-for-fun, 'benevolent saboteur.'

very good story but who was the mastermind?

This fic had me laughing throughout the whole thing. I loved it when Jazz read the police report, Sunstreaker's exchange with Jenkins, and despite all the trouble the twins are in, it doesn't faze them from getting into even more trouble.

I really, really, really love this one, simply because of that friendly, well broken in banter, especially between Jazz and Prowl at the begining and end. You can really tell that they've known each other for untold ages and the depth of their friendship, something well past simple comradery.

hee.. i just have to read it again and again.. .

I was cracking up throughout the whole story. Blades hollering about getting rained on and you can hear him from a mile away... cursing like hell... Sunstreaker throwing the fire hydrant... and Hot Spot asking about the hippopotamus (that was just cute)... then the rotary assembly falling on Blades.. and Hot Spot roaring at him and making the twins stand up...

And my favorite line of them all is Prowl's last one. Yeah. And I, too, am kinda interested in why Ratchet's calling Sideswipe 'paco'... that's just a bit weird.

so Jazz masterminded it? heh,heh. that was a suprise ending. But cool :-) And he was there snickering throughout the whole thing, too. heh heh. Good job. I liked it!