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Reviews For: What Might Have Been - Reviews: Page 1 of 4

sasukesmyemo394
2008-08-03
ch 5,
abuseWow o.o This is pretty interesting. I like it ^^
Ghostwriter
2008-08-02
ch 5,
abuseGreat job. Catch ya on the flip side.
RedDragen
2008-08-02
ch 5,
abuseI would love to see what you are going to do next
sairah
2008-08-02
ch 5, anon.
abuseGlad you updated. This is a great story, dealing with some tough issues. Nice Dean characterisation too.
EnglishLass
2008-08-02
ch 5,
abuseJust found this and read 5 chapters straight through.

It's amazing. My heart went out to Dean and John when they realised what effect their actions had had on Sam. I don't blame Dean as this was what he needed to do keep his family safe, and John thought that he was acting in the boys best interests. Hindsight is a wonderful thing.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
friendly
2008-08-02
ch 5,
abusegood job.. hope to seemore soon...
Dawn N
2008-08-02
ch 5,
abuseIt was nice to see a new chapter :-) It's been a while. I had to go back a re-read the other chapters.

I enjoyed it then and I enjoyed it now.

Thanks for updating!!
K Hanna Korossy
2008-08-02
ch 5,
abuseSo happy you updated, and with such a nice chapter. I don't quite blame Dean as much as he blames himself; clearly his aversion to chick-flick moments comes from the way he protects himself, too, and how he deals with the horrors of his own life. But Sam does need something different, as we've seen from the show, and I love that Dean is so willing to try that, even way beyond his comfort levels, if it'll help Sam. I also really appreciate Dean's logic here. Yes, Sam's idea that killing himself would free his family from the demon is logical in a horrible way, and plausible. But Dean's totally right, too, in pointing out that he and John would not be okay after that. I'm glad he said it, and that Sam heard it. Finally, I love some of the imagery, esp. Dean's massively tall brother wanting to disappear into the comforter. :>
I hope you'll keep at this story until it's finished!
w3
2008-08-01
ch 5, anon.
abuseyay an update

i really love this story alot

plz add more soon
pinkphoenix1985
2008-08-01
ch 5,
abusegreat!
Star Mage1
2008-04-30
ch 4,
abuseI love this story. I would love to read more about the other possible realities like if he went through with at age 14 and more about what happens to his brother and father months afterwards.
Ghostwriter
2008-03-24
ch 4,
abuseGreat job. Catch ya on the flip side.
sendintheclowns
2007-08-21
ch 4,
abuseWow, what a powerful story. I'm sorry I just now found it because it's quite the prize.

I can picture a young Sam lost and alone and contemplating suicide. I especially liked tha aha moment when John realized what life was like for his young son.

I hope you write more Supernatural fic in the future because this is good stuff!
SammyJaredfan
2007-05-04
ch 4,
abuseI absolutely love this story! I really wish you'd continue with it.
prophetofdoomy
2006-12-12
ch 4,
abuseJust to ask but do you have any plans to continue this fic?
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