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CMY
2007-07-21 . chapter 2
Ohhkkaayy...
I knew you were hilarious, comedic, sarcastic, cynical and sometimes downright skeptical, but I never figured that you would write a chapter that didn't have enough sense to fill a teaspoon.

Ah, well. Maybe this is something you're planning for a time, and that as you update it, it would make sense after a while.

Still, I can't connect the first chapter with the second one.
All I can figure out is this:

1) The techno geek's daydreaming about being the big star, the hero, the autograph signer, etc.
2) The Goth vegetarian's daydreaming about her half-ghost best friend...let's move on...
3) The middle-aged rich dude is daydreaming about the only thing he wants but never could have...what a loser. The only reason he wants Maddie is because she'll be the final addition to his list of possessions and accomplishments, not because he loves her...what a log-head...

Well, S-Chrome, if you want to take a break from your KP fics for a while and work on your DP ones for now, I won't stop you.
Write from the heart, man. Or your shades, whichever works better...

Until your next update, this is CMY, the long-winded guy.

P.S. Any chance of a fudge-filled, ghost-catching daydream in this story?

P.P.S. Are you planning on updating 'Good Grief' soon? Just curious...

P.P.P.S. Only one sports bash in this chapter? You ain't S-Chrome!! Where is he!? What have you done to 'im!?
PrincessGinger
2007-07-21 . chapter 2
Dabm this is funny! Thoughare you going to take another year to update?
Divine-Red-Crayon
2006-06-08 . chapter 1
Haha.

I liked it.

Good job.

Teehee.

Yes, it was clever and cute and I'm looking forward to reading more.

Ta!

-DRC-
Extraintrovert
2006-06-08 . chapter 1
Ha! Take that, sanity!

Really, where do you come up with these things? I mean, I know that young teenagers in the middle of school would have their minds anywhere but on the lesson, but that was just weird beyond my reason. However, I and many others would obtain great joy from what you think Danny would be dreaming about. I personally think that he mi- *is whacked over the head for starting that train of thought again*
Nonny The Anon One
2006-06-08 . chapter 1
Oh man! That was perfectly awesome! Wonderful, brilliant, fantastic and all that!

Great job!
Aero Tendo
2006-06-08 . chapter 1
Good story and you used a lot of words that ONLY a fan of Danny Phantom would grasp.
Poor Tucker and that song is JUST like how I imagine how in his weird mind, he would have it going! LOL!
I liked how you had it going in Sam's dream. Poor girl, having to wait for so very long for Danny (Clueless) Fenton to getting around to realizing what everyone else, including even his dense father has realized... Sam loves Danny and Danny loves her too... just hasn't realized it yet. :)
So, yeah... I watch the show. Let the new episode commence tomorrow! Yay! Danny Fenturd is Danny Phantom?? LOL!
o-flightless
2006-06-08 . chapter 1
That was really good, I love the way you give such detail and get into the characters minds!!

So is this a series of oneshots, or is it over, because I didn't see a complete up there...

Anyway great story!

~kpandron
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