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| broadwaybear 2008-02-16 ch 4, | abuseI like it. It's a good story, a good idea, and a good plot. What's not to like? You also did a fine job writeing it . Please continue! |
| tOrA9223 2007-12-30 ch 4, | abuseReally great! Update soon! |
| roguecatwoman 2007-09-18 ch 4, | abuseThere aren't enough Batman/X-men x-overs and there should be! You have a great story here, I hope you continue with it. |
| KalipsoRed 2007-08-28 ch 4, anon. | abuseSo far I'm getting into it. I LOVE the X-men and Batman and this sounds like the beginning of a very interesting story! Can't wait to see what you come up with next. I do have a request, if you do choose to put Jubilee in this story somewhere, please do not make her a defenseless, whinny, idiot person. I know that most X men fans prefer Kitty Pride, and even though I like Jubilee better I don't mind reading a story where Kitty does better than Jubilee in a fight. However I can't stand it when when Kitty gets the best of Jubilee because Jubilee is written as being whinny, stupid, or incapable. Jubilee may seem that way at times to others who read the X comics but I've never read of her giving up or being whinny in a fight. Sorry didn't mean to write a book about my plight in your reviews. :) Thanks for a good story and good luck with the rest! |
| Protector of Canon2 2007-07-19 ch 4, | abuseIs that Kitty Pryde or am I just being stupid because it's after midnight and I haven't gotten enough sleep the past few nights? I'd like to see more of this. Babs the mutant is an interesting idea. |
| s0ra16 2007-07-03 ch 4, | abuseI Love it. update soon! |
| Shadir 2007-05-17 ch 4, | abuseI like fic a lot, it is really attractive. And that secretary of Bruce this brilliant one, loves me. For sure it is not kindred of Alfred? |
| Catfan 2007-02-28 ch 4, anon. | abuseI love your story!! I have a few questions: do the X-men all know each other here? Will Catwoman make an appearance? Will bribing work to get you to update soon? Please, please udate soon!! :) |
| Afalstein 2007-01-25 ch 4, | abuseInteresting. I like how the different characters react, and how you have hidden hints of various powers, like the feather in the chair. Braddock's "probing" of Batman is cool, too. I don't like Batgirl as a mutant, or her informing the X-men on Bruce, but it makes sense in a way, and it does help to tie the two together. One note. In "The Dark Knight Returns" Frank Miller talks about a gang called "the Mutants" who are taking over the city. You could play around with this. |
| KittyBat 2007-01-05 ch 4, anon. | abuseLove the story so far! Did Bruce really see Selina outside his window? Is she going to be part of the story? I really liked that Psylocke sensed Bruce thinking of a black cat...that was so cool!! |
| prayerrun 2007-01-04 ch 4, | abusehey cool story...are we gonna get to see Batman team up with the X men? I like the story so far, but it seems like everytime I see a Batman/Xmen crossover it's never about the superhero side. |
| Goldylokz 2006-11-17 ch 4, | abuseLoved the chinese food joke. Although I do wish someone would write Betsy in her original body once in a while. *sigh* I guess I'll accept it. Loved Kitty as the secretary as well. She has to start somewhere to move up the corporate ladder. Or at least to spy on someone in the corporate ladder. O, is Lex going to show some vengence? Whoknows? Can't wait for more! |
| Dolphinchic 2006-08-02 ch 3, | abuseplease write another chapter i can wait to read it |
| Fezzle 2006-07-27 ch 3, | abuseGood premise and writing. Update soon please! |
| digi-gal-rox 2006-07-26 ch 3, | abusewow. was never expecting that. babs has powers?! pls update soon! can't wait for the next chapter! all excited! *jumps up and down excitedly* |