This is a truely beautiful story. I love how you strung together all the different reality-thingies. It was confusing at times but that confusion caused deeper thought into what was happening. Splendid writing.

Basically Lina/L-sama/"Lord of Nightmares" saw the multiple possibilitys of that incarnation, right. In my opinion, Lina is L-sama, in the same way that Rezo is Ruby-eye.

Dear God, I feel like sobbing.

That was absolutely beautiful.

I pity the people who can't accept it as it is because they can't "understand" it. The fact it's written that way is for a reason, and that reason contributes to the meaning of it all.

... What crack are you smoking?

It's not really a bad fic but I... just don't understand...

I pride myself in being ABLE to understand. This offends me. Just a bunch of made up stories from the past (or possible past). That's all it seems to be to me. Well written definately but still. It feels unusual. I don't understand. I'm sorry.

Oh yeah and random strings of words that Goury says to her tied together repeatedly to make the unusual feel of Quazi-conciousness. Interesting concept though it would be better if the story had any actual point to it. No ending and basically no real beginning to this either.

There is like... no change that occurs. Lina is exactly where she was when she started if my assumption is correct. In oblivion.

Hmm...

Ho hum.

I'm really impressed. The whole "stream of consciousness" style is really difficult to pull off, but you did it beautifully. Lina's desires are manifested into these dreams, and you really bring her character into a sharp focus. Wonderful story.

This is truly brillant. They way you showed emotion and imagery was great. I really look forward to anything else you write.

Wow... that was beautifully written. It was also very original. Well done.

-Ahria

Sunny: magnifisent work. very well done.

Ramon: is this fic really made in 2003?

Alandra: but its fine none the less. Going to our fav

Oh very nice! I like it a lot. Had some very nice poetic moments in there. I like the alt worlds/potential futures/pasts as well. Great job all around. ^-^

It...kinda confused me, okay it confused me ALOT but... I dunno it :sniff: still made me feel like I wanted to cry or something. Parts of it were so touching and... the words in itelix (is that spelled right?) made the story have feeling to it. I really liked it!

What a beautiful, moving story! I assume that this all takes place while Lina is lost inside of the Sea of Chaos. This is simply beautiful and really encompasses all that Lina has become by the end of NEXT and the maturity that she has found during the course of the series. I love how you have the breaks, how it's a stream of consciousness. There's all the dreams, alternate realities and glimpses of what could be in the future for her. Again, this is just, just beautiful.