This is actually quite interesting, I wish you had some more reviews for this, I really do. Lol, as a fanfiction writer myself, this story makes me feel guilty for the hell I've put some characters through. XD

Like the idea of dragging Jak and Daxter into it - I think you portray all three's personalities very well, especially Daxter in particular. Jak's just a tad more harsh than I remember, but I can still roll with it. And you did a great job with Axel too.

I await the next chapter!
Peace,
~MoonlightUmbreon

great, i love this story! glad to see it updated. lol Even Steven? so does that mean Vexen's last name is Steven? woah, didn't know that. well, ya learn somethin new every day! laterz, an plz update soon!
-SSAHC ^.~

OMFG! tis a new chappie! YAY! i love this story, can't wait for the next one now =D

Woah, I haven't seen this fic for quite a while! I was seriously wondering about it!

Very interesting, and albeit, somewhat creepy chapter. Eesh, now I have the shivers from even THINKING of that fight. o,o

It had a sort of cold setting, the only highlight I can think of it is when Axel got bopped in the back of his head by Jak. Lol!

Nothing more to say! I shall poof! *poofs away*

wow cool. Very origanil! kep writing please.

This is getting really good! Update soon!

Oh lordy! Dumbledore in that scene with Axel- freaking hilarious!

Oh! What happens next?

Cool! Continue...

I LOVE IT!

The description, voice, and funny- parts are ALL awesome!

Damn, girl! It's too bad for the lack of reviews though..

^_^

Wow.

That was a very mind-probing chapter. Very. It makes me want to write MUCH better, and kill cliches with some sharp implement.

Odd. But, *shrugs* it's all very interesting and like I said, thought-provoking. Apologies for missing out on these chappies. I haven't been on the computer much. I don't really have much to say, but I feel like I went through a revelation or something. Huh. *blinks*

Wonderful chapter! I eagerly await the next oneX3
Xeros is a very interesting character. I can't wait to see how she gets along with everyone on their journey.
Onward to reality!

Absolutely brilliant! Very original! Dumbledore is the best^-^

Sorry, I just have to say this. This is my favorite chapter so far. I don't think I've ever told you that. It's just so... I dunno. Entertaining maybe?
At any rate, can't wait to see more, but I know we're both busy right now. Even I'm not updating regularly. Good luck with college app crap.