Aww! Hatori should have hugged Aya! This is a really interesting story... just thought I might review it. Five years later.

This is really god. Please update soon.

Its very good. Please please please update soon!

Aymae...don't die! Is he? Please update got to know what happens.

Woah, interesting chapter, Akire-san! You're right, it was a bit longer than the others, and it set up a bit more of the background of the story, but it still keeps its mystery. Ayame can't really hide what's happening to him from Yuki now, at the very least! :O

That's okay about the swearing. I don't like it either, but since these Ayame-stalkers aren't really very nice individuals, they'd be unlikely to have great manners.

Good chapter, my friend!

Zuki.

Nice! Except the cursing. . . Yeah. . . Didn't like that. I understand why and all, but. . . Yeah. Oh so eloquent tonight, aren't I?

Anyway, very good! Even if you are monopolized by a play (ooh! what play are you tech crew for?), it was a good chapter. Finally getting Yuki involved! And that minor conflict with the TV was fun. "A sale gone wrong?" I'm sure. I was expecting a dress with PINK FRILLS, not PURPLE LACE! How dare he!

And yep, I do appreciate the slightly longer format. Keep it up! I love reading it!

Ah, I just luv this story (can't wait 'til the next part)

. Sorry, Im so bad at keeping track of fics, and reading them in time -' Love the chapter though "I was dancing with the mannequins, you see, and one had such dreadful coordination that we both ended up crashing through the window" XD Lol.

Lol, I loved Ayame's reply! XD You're right, that is SUCH a thing Ayame would say!]

I liked Hatori in this chapter, he was very in-character. And I also liked how Ayame was relating the incident to Mine, then using a flashback. It was a pretty neat little device. _

Like the story, and from the abundance of chapters suddenly, I can tell you do too!

Zuki.

Good chapter Akire, even if it is short! Aww, poor Hatori, worrying about Ayame the Magnificent so. I can't wait to find out what Ayame's reply is! *Dashes off to read*

Oh, and you're very welcome! I'm so glad you liked the present! *Hug*

Zuki.

Aw, shucks. You're so nice. Thanks for the thanks.

Excellent work on both the past two chapters, by the way! Short, but fun to read. Poor Hatori really ought to get some sleep! Ayame does make it difficult.

"Samurai-sword-swinging-self." Makes me laugh

Eep! Gotta go! Keep up the marvelous work, and I'll be looking for (longer?) chapters!

I loved it. Update soon.

XD I loved Hatoti's Sleep vs. Ayame debate! That was so funny! And so Hatori! XD

A short chapter, but still good! I wonder how Ayame is going to be, once Hatori gets there! ;_; I hope he's okay! And what will Ayame do and say? He couldn't exactly pretend that he's alright, due to the many bullet holes in his shop...

Good chapter!

Zuki.

Ayame! Eeks! Love the story so far.

I loved it! You need to update really soon!