|Reviews for Planet of Chaos|
| Peachrocks 6/30/06 . chapter 2
Nice to hear from you again.
Okay so you continue to develop the plot and Jonathan is about as stealthy as a bowling ball while around Jo. Metrosexual, hehe, it reminds me of a stupid joke hero called Metrosexualman... Odd thing is aside from the hair style, he does LOOK oddly like Jonathan who cares about his looks. Sounds nothing like him though :P.
Shadow continues to be Miss mysterious even when Jo asked her a direct question, what exactly is she about, can she be trusted I wonder ;).
Good to hear that you'll have some of your originals return... Suzan must come back! She must defeat the Skedar with her cookie launcher! Cass and Trent are dead this time I bet, otherwise they'd have been mentioned by now...
Hope you get other reviews and... update... sometime
| Peachrocks 6/11/06 . chapter 1
I like your latest originals thus far... I wonder if Shadow's nickname is given to her by Carrington and why, like Perfect Dark...
Obviously it wasn't practical for the Skedar to attack before now, they needed the 'natives' to help them but the question has to be asked, why would the Skedar declare another war against another race when they already have their hands full with the Maians. What else do they think Earth has, or is it just to gain more land and territory...
Anyway that's what makes you good, you make me guess what the motives are for those involved even if it is supposed to be just taken and accepted. Please do more :D