Wow! Very intense! I liked it!

Very moving!

Very moving chapter! Wonderful!

This is beautiful! You've captured them perfectly!!
I especially love this line: "Dig deeper, he urges. The walls are made for you to break."


And I love Matchbox 20 and every song you've used, they are all very appropriate for their chapter :)

Keep it coming, you're probably the best writer here and I respect you SO much!
Tricki

that was short...lol made me drool for more!
oh..I thought of a cute nickname to call you...Dee-Dee! lol
hope you have more coming...

-mj(wgf)

Aw...Angry/Frustrated Stella! LoL

I'm sorry to hear that your muse is dead!! Just think back on Seasons 1 & 2...those were great Mac/Stella seasons. ;o) hehehehe Hopefully you'll find some inspiration again!!

However, I happened to like this installment too. Very well-written!! :o)

LOVING IT! More soon!!

~mandi *_*

ack! more! more!...puhuess!Mac's been through tough times and Stella's there with him all the way...:) how's that for good huh?:) i like it..

-mj(wgf)

I really like this, update soon!

I loved it, the emotion is so strong and written in a way that's so powerful. Wonderful, keep it going!

Very well-written. I could feel the emotion. I would love to see more chapters. I love MS stuff and wouldn't mind a bit of romance :)

Aw...such emotion. I sure hope Stella is able to pull him back up. I hate seeing Mac so tortured.

^_^

LOVING IT! More soon!

~mandi *_*

Aw cute! Mac and Stella... he's angry, she's tactful. Perfect

Wow...that was moving. :o( Poor Mac...he's been through so much...

I know, I know...I feel for a TV character. LoL

Great job!

~mandi *_*

whoa..strong emotions flying all over here...nice...:) hope you try writing romance/humor...kinda brings you to a new prospective...wait..was that a request??*hint hint* lol MS rules!!