Wow. Thank you so much for writing this. It was brilliant. :)

I really really liked this story. I've just auditioned for the production of Rebel Without A Cause at school and found this story quite interesting.

welldone :D

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That was fantastic! You write very well, and I like all the details you filled in.

Just one thing - the part with Jim was a little vague. What made her change her mind or her feelings towards him? That would enhance the story a bit, but otherwise...

GREAT JOB!

I like the story so far. I'm glad to see a fic about "Rebel Without a Cause." Keep it up.