ACH! I can't believe you stopped it there. Leave it to my imagination! I can imagine ALOT and some of it ain't healthy and I am pretty sure NONE of it would be T rated. D* Well I really liked the story anyways. Thanks

HE he he... but its true, some places really suck at making tiramasu. I love Tiramasu.
Cool story.

Loved it! Slightly OOC at some points, but on the whole very well done. Length is definitely a plus as well as descriptions; I could see the scene playing in my head! Definitely one of the best one-shots I've read here so far.

This was really, really good! I laughed a fair bit at the exchanges between the two of them!

I will say that some of the writing seemed a little OOC-like, but it just added to the humor of the story, I found.

This story was great! I loved every word! And it prolly would have been cool if this was a two-shot but it fits rather nicely this way as well! :]

Great job! You're an amazing writer!

Sincerely,
DragonGirl323

Oh how I love this story! It was one of the first fanfictions I had ever read and I just now ran across it again. It's so cute!

Oops, I accidently put this review under your Earring fic when I was writing about this one...so here it is again:

I love your writing. This was so funny. I really think that you should do a second chapter and have the events from Vincent's perspective. Oh, and then a third chapter that continues where these the first two left off. Yeah, that'd be great! :-)

Keep up the Vincent/Tifa stories...your Elena/Reno stories are wonderful too.

mar

Witty. Loved it. Tifa was hilarious.

Haha. I saved a ninja.
Anyhow, I really like the way you wrote Tifa's part.
Well done!

hilarious.. xD but i would have been more satisfied if you ended it yourself..

I always join "Save-a-ninja" committees when I can.
I liked it. I'm liking your stories. It's light and cute and fun to read. :) I liked it loads!

rofl I think you should of kept going.

This is one of the best one-shots I've ever read, period. I absolutely adored the interaction between Tifa and Vincent, especially her silent scrutiny of him while he read a book about delirium. Gosh, he is one drop-dead-gorgeous man. I wouldn't mind being carried off on his shoulder, especially if it meant a day filled with "exhilarating" fun with him. ^__^ (I'd gladly forget the fact that he's pixilated and whatnot.) I almost wish you would continue, even though this is a one-shot. With my vivid and racy imagination, I'm surely pleased either way. But of course, having more to read is always nice, too. Anyway, good work.

Oh, and I might comment that his actions seemed so very out of character and unexpected (though after he mentioned the "exhilarating" distraction, I instantly knew what he was going for). Still, I really enjoyed this. I laughed, blushed, giggled, smiled, and all that jazz.

If I know Vincent...and I do...I can almost be positive of the outcome of this excursion...as depressing as it may be, I suppose that guessing is all I'll be able to do...very well, I shall do so...This was, however, very well written, and I found myself laughing during several points at Tifa's musings.

i LOVE this story! absolutely wonderful and romantic! way to go! the little subtle glances and turns of speech--excellent! i love it (did i mention that before)! and i loved the little author's note with the cloud-like ending. me and my brother used to do cloud imitations (with the head scratching, collapsing to knees then falling forward, and grabbing head and shaking maneuvers). hilarious. anyway, this is definitely going on my favorites list! woohoo! and with your permission, i'd like to add it to my C2, but don't try to get in touch with me by review reply, 'cause my email alerts are not working. just email me at or review one of my stories and let me know whether that's ok or not.