A good story. I liked it.

great idea with the heat. :) poor beka though :(, it took her a while to get the idea...

It made a good impression when I first read it a while ago elsewhere (you know where ^_^), but now, after I reread it, it is simply marvellous, I could imagine every single outfit and raised eyebrow from the characters. ^__^

One tincy little thing I'm not sure of: does Andromeda have a cooling system ? (they are in space - which is cold, extremely cold, around absolute zero - that's cold u know :P).

Anyway, I feel bad this is only a one shot. I would have liked to reading more about this. (please update you're other stories soon, especially the one from the other place I know you from ^__^)

I can imagine how Rommie was dressed but I had better not put it up on this board. Funny story I enjoyed it.

this is an interesting story..it could be more detailed..but i like it...tell me there's more? can't wait to see what happens next... ;D