"breathes heavily" Poor Buzz

DAMMIT! YOU KILLED BUZZ!

DAMMIT!

delightfully morbid.

However...

"when his altitude was roughly 15 feet. He then achieved a new velocity in which he fell rapidly "

Did you write this during a rather boring Physics lesson?

I also find that it's jumpy. I find it hard to believe that Buzz wouldn't notice a large grey rock and that tripping on said rock would launch him into a well.

Leaving on a positive note; the premise is great. The fact that a toy wants money and will do anything to get it, is hilarious. What would he do with it if he managed to get his hands on it? What lengths will he go to in order to get it? If you expanded upon that, it would make this even better.

Keep it up, you have potential.

the story sounded kinda babyish if u dont mind me grilling. i liked it but was just nothing special, but then again i love buzz, hes on my shirt! so of course i dont like him being helpless and left to die. it would be great if u continued with a second series or sumthin tho and he gets saved, that would totally make this story rock, or according to me who loves happy endings.

but yea, it was kinda childish amd putting in the big words didnt make it any less childish.

still it was a decent story, and i mean my words to be constructive critcism.

Cool story! You should have had Sid come out ! P

Kinda short though... \ But still good!