Nice, love to see through Kyoya's head and you did that! Awesome job.

Great job... this was an enthralling character study.

It's hard to guess what Kyouya's really thinking, but I think you nailed it pretty dern well! Love the writing style, too. Great work!

Loved the TamaHaru fluff bit, too. Hee!

Fun.

You've nailed Kyouya's character both content-wise and stylistically. This is an extremely well-written piece. I also like your analysis of the Tamaki and Haruhi relationship through Kyouya...that's something I've wanted to do as well and you executed it deftly.

Excellent work, I'll be looking forward to more from you!

*claps* You've captured Kyouya so well. Wow, simply... amazing. Congratulations :) If my favorites list wasn't full I would fav this instantly !