 Final-Fan 2007-09-08 . chapter 5 What the heck was the very ending all about? Otherwise, a good fun romp with nothing to detract from the experience. Very enjoyable and completely in character, except perhaps that Mousse is crazier than normal. |
 Amara Anon 2006-10-24 . chapter 1From the very first sentence I was hooked into this story. Such a creative idea, but it is wholly due to the quality of your writing that sells it. Both thoroughly entertaining and well written. Right away you set up an intriguing plot. And the humor works really well. I laughed out loud at the line about gravity being like a mercenary. I also like that Inuyasha ran into Ryoga rather than Ranma; it's an interesting point of view for such a crossover. Thanks for writing this fic. I'll come back later to read the rest. |
 CTHKSI 2006-09-30 . chapter 5XD!
*Very* well written. It was worth the half hour scrawling thru to find this fic. :] |
 Cap'n Chryssalid 2006-09-05 . chapter 5OH yes, that was a fun little read! You displayed a knack for believably light-hearted dialogue (perhaps the most difficult kind of them all), and the whole endeavor was well executed. I especially loved the end. Good job!
I'll admit it was also a pleasant surprise to see a mention of myself and LC in there. It is immensely heartening when I read something like that; really, it is the true reward for one's writing efforts. |
 Havenoname 2006-08-22 . chapter 5That was cool! |
 JustWriter2 2006-08-20 . chapter 5Kodachi?
-JW`chan |
 TMH 2006-08-19 . chapter 5 I was rather disappointed with the final chapter: the previous chapters frequently showed things from Ryouga's point of view, and I was interested in seeing what his point of view to the fight with Inuyasha and the ultimate loss of the shards would be... but there was nothing. |
 Aqualens 2006-08-18 . chapter 5 That was so funny, I almost died laughing! It's very rare that a story would cause me to pause in reading it because I was laughing so hard. A VERY good job at writing this, and to think that I almost didn't read it because the summary had Ryoga as the main character! Thank goodness I decided to give it a go. One of the better short series here. |
 Patirick 2006-07-17 . chapter 1I think Ryouga seemed a bit too polished and intelligent in your early dialogue, however, later when he encounters Akane, he's much more believable. It's also strange how fast he realized the shards were stopping him from changing--constrasting with the Water Proof Soap arc.
Regardless, the shards preventing the curses from taking effect, is quite an explosive trigger. |
 ShanniC 2006-07-07 . chapter 1You have combined all of my favorites. The elments from boths shows havce come together in this story to become an excellent story. I have my favorite characters here. Inuytasha and Ryouga. Although as much as I love Ryouga, Inuyasha tops the list. I hope they get those shards back because they need them to defeat Naraku. Perhaps they can call a truce? Also, if you do decide to bring Kagome into the plot, let's keep it at a minimum. All in all, great job. :) I would love to see more! |
 Raen 2006-07-04 . chapter 4 This is good... You can write, you know the characters well and my favourite character atm seems to be the center of attention.
Hope to see more soon, also I hope Ryouga-demon kicks some **. |
 Havenoname 2006-06-17 . chapter 4Nice cliffhanger! |
 nased0 2006-06-17 . chapter 4Wow, that was unexpected !
I can't wait to read what happens next, poor Ryoga... |
 katan321 2006-06-13 . chapter 3Great! Don't stop! |
 Havenoname 2006-06-13 . chapter 3This is getting really good! I like this a lot now! |