Hi

I just read your story it was very good.

you aren't going to stop writing, are you?
you are really good
i hope you'll write a lot more pretender stories
maybe the pretender/ jag stories
or don't you like JAG ?
maybe you stories should be a bit more longer
more than one chapter or something !
why did you only get 7 reviews
maybe you will get a lot more
will yoiu email me back
bye

A.- The Father Juan Valdez part was just To Funny! You had me laughing out load at that one!

Really enjoyed your story. I enjoyed seeing Jarod dealing with these various moral and spiritual issues. Though, I feel that he didn't really resolve his "issues" entirely in this story.

Also, to be honest, I thought it quite odd that you used "Now I lay me down to sleep", as Sydney's 2nd prayer. I was under the impression that it was a "child's prayer"! Though, to be honest, I am not Catholic, so maybe I am wrong about it being a bit juvenile for Sydney. Whatever, it certainly didn't "ruin" the story for me or anything. Just raised an eyebrow! LOL!

Regardless, I think you did a really good job A., keep up the good work!

Hey there...just wanted to say I thought this story was one of the best Pretender stories I've ever read. I especially loved how you focused the story on God-very cool!

You depicted everyone and everything beautifully. Thankyou for the great read.

Liked the story. Will Jarod compare other religions as well?

Beautifully written, and well-handled on the religious aspect.

Good job. You kept the reader's attention and the story moving.

Deep philosophical thought and good questions.

I really enjoyed your story. :) I've always believed that Jarod was definitely the type to find faith. You should definitely do a sequel.