This is a VERY interesting story. I would love to read more but since it seens to not ahve been updated in quite a while... that's a shame.

My curiosity is high piqued anyway. I feel like re-reading it again.

Ok, I am terribly confused... but highly interested! I can't wait to find out what's going on here! Excellent job so far!

It would figure I'd get back into reading fanfiction and read a story that is incomplete. I mean, I wouldn't mind if it wasn't so well written and so freakin' original. I would LOVE to see this finished, but I can understand if it never does get finished. You have great talent that I bet has improved over these three years. Now excuse me, I'm going off to cry in a corner because I shall have to make up the rest of the story in my head. Blah.

interesting...update soon

whats wrong? why arn't you finishing it? come on! get with the program! dont let me say this twice i know you are reading this i will be VERY angry if you dont finish it! e-mail me! and tell me you read it or ill send multiple e-mails and wont stop till you finish the fic or tell me you will.

Is this going to be continued? Please say yes, please say yes, please say yes... I see it's been over a year since the last update, but I'd hate to see this remain unfinished.

okay, i know you haven't updates in a little less than a year, but this girl reeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaally wants to know what happens... pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaase! i'm begging you!

*frowns* I'm confused, waaaaa! @_@

More soon, ne? I don't like being kept in the dark

Wow! This story actually has a plot, you're not just killing things, and the characters are just that- characters! 3 GREAT elements, all combined in one! I'm really tired of "...and they shared a passionate kiss on the balcony." In other words *clears throat* WRITE FASTER!

weirdly...good. but what the hell is going on? @_@

You have to post another chapter soon the suspense is killing me. I put this story in my favourites folder and keep checking it, but alas no new chapter. *sob* Please, please, please, super-duper-major-kill-Selfie-to-steal-her-language please.

Update soon! its great! im curious! update soon, pls!

C'mon! When are you gonna continue this story anyways? I've been waiting for months already! Please update sooon! Onegai! You're such a talented writer! _

hope you keep working on it! _ (can't come up with any critisism that will help you anyway) It's nice! really! _

I love this story. You have me hooked. Please post more soon.