That was a wonderful tour of possible futures and interesting short stories between our fave couple. I love the happy yet vague ending. They'll find their own dream together. I love how the first few end on a kiss. She is still young, after all!

Nicely written. You get points for knowing what nonplussed really means.

This was quite good. It is very different than any story I've read before and, thus, more enjoyable for being unusual. I wish your conclusion and the conversation between Sarah and Jareth had been longer after the reveal of whose dreams were in the crystal.. I did however really enjoy this. - Clare

A very lovely story. Jareth has some lovely dreams, though sadly, they remain only dreams in this one of yours. But I liked them anyway. Thanks for sharing!

Thank you very much for writing this~

I enjoyed every chapter and liked it really much.
Young Sarah and yet it was "safe". And she begunn form alone to accept Jareths feelings. Very lovely. And the end was just right.

:-) I think I am ging to check your account for more fictions.
Congratulations~

saniika~

A sotry within a story...good idea! Thought it is actually really short, you did enfolded the realtionship in her dreams. Good!

I read on~

Thank you for the chapter~
Saniika

This is really looking promising...it makes actually sense! I like it...very much~

I see he learns quickly...I wonder what is in the crystal...
(this will sound like spaming, but I made a picture before called " A gift" - Jareth gave Sarah a crystal.)

I read on~Thank you for the chapter

saniika~

Hello,

a friend pointed to me your fanfiction, so I came here and started to read it.

This is really nice, I think it is apropriate continiue of the movie...hm...I wonder why "boredom" creates usually such well things? A mystery.

I like how you took the path of their characters...So carefree. I agree the real "thing" between them could not happen in the movie. More like after the "game". You displayed this thought very nicely.

I read on~

Thanks for the chapter~
saniika~

Aw... sweet sweet fluff. ^^

very nice

this well written

very nice

very good

Oh .. wow. Ah .. I just had to say, that last line just tore at my heart and I'm tearing up. It's riduculous because up until that point, it was a bit heartbreaking, but nothing close to the point of tears.

Aw .. Here I am, sniffling like a fool.

Well written dear, and my deepest apologies for my lack of reviews as I honestly did not know what to write. I loved the concept of this .. Aw .. his dreams .. How gorgeously bittersweet. I'm contemplating whether or not to favorite this as I've already favorited one of your more recent works, and I've promised myself to only favorite one work of each author to make room for any others. But .. aw. I guess Author Favorite will have to do.

Rofl. Reading this, with a playlist, and Eurythmics "Sweet Dreams" plays. Aha, gorgeous. Play it.

Wow...I mean wow. That was brilliant.