VERY cool! and creative to boot! nice alternative couple! hehe

ja ne!

MORE MORE MORE MORE NOW THIS IS WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT DARIAN/MAMORU BASHING YAHOOOOOOOOOOOO!

More detailing would've made this more believable, than just straight-to-the-point. Kudos to the interesting concept, though. Rating: ***.

Great fic post more soon!

I really like your story. I think you have a really good plot going and even the title had me interested. One thing though, maybe you could make the chapters a little longer. They are shorter than what I usually see. Please keep going with the story ASAP. I would apprieciate it if you would e-mail me when you post any new chapters.

I love it! Darien-bashing stories rock! Continue!