OMG I cried! so good holy crap wa This is such a great story! naruto T_T he will wake up! thank u for this wonderful story!

this looks good but im curios you said they were all twenty and there are somethings in this chapter that suggest otherwise?

just wondering if you are going to do a sequal couse its a great story but naruto didnt wake up.

damn, this is depressing. ugh.

yaoi, much?

not that bad.

wow,wow,wow, and wow. I'm absolutely amazed by this story. It was amazing. This is definitely one of my favourite stories ever of Naruto.

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

oh come on! please write a sequel! it cant' end like this! i loved it it made me cry!! plz don't end it w/ flickering eyelids! have naruto wake up! plz!

all i can say is "wow"
it's very moving

I rather enjoyed this story to be brutally honest. I'm not much of a yaoi fan but this story didn't focus on the sex... it focused on the love that lead to the sex. You made me cry by the way, but that's ok. This story was very well put together, had a solid plot and your beta did a wonderful job. I liked the fact that you showed one of the darkest sides of being a jinchurikki (did I spell that right?). Most stories focus on either absorbing the demon's power or it gives a reason behind their attack of what ever village. There was another story I read that used a similar reason for the demons existence and attack as you. And it's true. If the human race had the ability to create demons with their sins, the world would be nothing but demons. Getting off my soap box. I like that Naruto 'lives' and that the 3 of them make a 'binding' commitment to each other even if he is in a coma (their rings) and I would love to see a possible one shot of what would happen should he awaken? But I understand if it would be better left to the readers imagination. Again, I enjoyed this story and it was very well put together. You and your beta did a wonderful job.

-Tattered Faerie-

I would like to thank you for having the genius to write this story. It made me cry as no other story on this site has before. You manage to bring out the emotions of the characters and allow the reader to feel them too. Thank you for this beautiful piece of fiction.

it ends like THAT?! it can't end like THAT! Naruto has to wake up and... and... *cries!* HE HAS TO BE OK!

this was not an angst fic. this was a tragedy fic. you need to learn to tell the difference. really. or you could ad a chapter or two. that would deffinately do it. but until you do you will have to live in fear of the demons shaped like dust bunnies because they do not like people who don't put fics in the right genres. its quite simple to pick out a fics genre but some people are just too stupid to do it, i guess. fix it or be haunted for eternity.

with love,
Me.

Very beautiful and well written. The quotes were well thought out and placed. Each chapter had strong meaning, and pertained to the story, nothing was rushed, no mistakes I noticed either. Wonderful job.

Nearly cried. Very nearly.

Perhaps a sequel if you don't already have one out?

Do as you please, this was great.

I would review every chapter, but I just couldn't do that! And I'll have you know it takes a lot to make me cry but I think I was pretty much tearing up every chapter in this! There were such cute parts, but oh my gosh, the angst! It was so wonderfully written, I applaud you, I really do.
Ayame

Ok i just stayed up all night to read your fic and let me say one of the best written fics that i've read EVER! You didn't make the characters OC or anything. The pairing was perfect even how the relationship progressed.

will there be a sequel?