 cloudy-sky-dreamer 2009-10-29 . chapter 85This story is great! I think that it's amazing that you can write so much! (I wish I could do that) I love how Hinata is portratyed in your story! Awesome! :D I think that it's pretty unique to add the Kumjal and the other spiritual stuff! Great job and please update soon! |
 XxKohana-uchihaxX 2009-10-04 . chapter 85WOW... all i have to say is just WOW!
Really, this is the BEST Fanfiction i have EVER read.. and i rally mean it!
Your own characters, the story line, the things happening.. its just addicting. I rewiewed to this story ocne (i wasnt registered)
I have read the story from chater one to the curren one.It took me a long time, even when i was reading non-stop...but it was REALLY worth the time i spent reading your incredible story. I wish i could write like that O.o
The characters i like the most are Yuki (he is just adorable), Tatsuha, Toya and assaroth, your Version of hinata.. and of Course Sasuke :D i want to say soo much to this story and i hope i don't sound stupid...or something O.o
Anyways...Referring to the latest chapter i read: It is SO perfect, that they FINALLY got together and are married... and Madara is just CUTE !
anyways... i don't want to go on your nerves,...
i have just one favor to ask you:
PLEASE, PLEASE Update as soon as you can... i really hope that you don't have decided to stop writing the story :(:(:(
I'm looking forward to an answer of you (referring to my 'favor' or if you have decided to do'nt write the story anymore.. i really hope that that is not the case :()
Anyays.. BYEBYEE !
Your Faithfullest Reader and Biggest Fan,
XxKohana-uchihaxX <3 |
 DancingxDemyx 2009-09-16 . chapter 1Nya. O.m.g that qas actually pretty good!
A few grammer mistakes but the storyline made up for it ^^ |
 toni 2009-09-09 . chapter 85 beautiful!1 pllz update soon |
 nwyd 2009-08-30 . chapter 85haha...madara...thats so cute! like your story. whats going to happen to hinata? and sasuke? and their daughter? please update soon! ^^ |
 nwyd 2009-08-24 . chapter 54haha...sasuke is an asshole...but the letter he supposedly wrote was so sweet! |
 nwyd 2009-08-20 . chapter 10no! i dont like nejiten! oops. sorry. but i still think your story is awesome so far! Ah! why did shino have to back out? *sniff* boohoo! O.o im acting like a retard. just ignore me. |
 lacedawn 2009-08-10 . chapter 85*sniffs*
that...was...great...
I'm so glad that i looked at my review history...for some reason i never rcvd an alert on this chapter! wtf ff??
anyways, i'm glad to see that the story isnt over. your a/n is kinda...unsettling? but, you've got me on my toes waiting to see what happens with the council, will they have to go on the run...again? will she get nothing? ugh! to many things can happen!! thanks for updating, hope to see the new chap up soon. |
 hinatahyuuga213 2009-07-24 . chapter 2 omg i dont get this how is it sauhina? |
 EvilChikara 2009-07-21 . chapter 1Lmao I'm reading it a 4th time! X] I don't know why but I want to. I'm going to time myself...Haha xD! |
 XxSasuke993xX 2009-07-20 . chapter 83 Wow... thats all i can say
i started from chapter one on friday July 17th 2009 and read all the way up to here. You are a creative kami. This is the one chapter that really struck me because Sasuke is exactly how i pictured him to be if he returned. No, i am a guy. Team Zero is by far the greatest thing ive ever heard of, and your flawless crossover transitions along with japanese mythology is quite breathtaking
i just wanted to say thanks for writing |
 Ms. Crimson Mr. Obsidian 2009-07-14 . chapter 85I haven't read any part of your story and I never will since I'm not a Sasu/Hina shipper but, holy shit this story is so fucking long! For this I commend you. I won't read it but judging from all these reviews that I did read, I'd say it's an excellent story. If I did support that couple, this would probably be a favorite since it's so long. How are you able to write so much? If you're wondering how I found this story when I don't even like the couple, it's because I'm a part of that 1, 0 plus community thing. Great job on the story. |
 SHeWithNoName 2009-07-09 . chapter 85omg! please don't separate them! |
 Saki-Hime 2009-07-08 . chapter 85You don't know how long I've waiter for them to be together. Actually you do know - you made me wait 85 chapters for them to be together. PLEASE do not separate them again, not when they have a daughter.
Awesome chapter, please update soon. |
 EvilChikara 2009-07-06 . chapter 85Aww! That is so cute! I didn't see Baby Madara as a girl because of who was named Madara first. She's so cute! Wow, she is going to be really strong when she gets older. Oh, and I LOVED everyone's faces. The most priceless was Kakashi! :] This is the best stroy I've ever read and it keeps getting better! Go Madara-chan! :) |