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101spacemonkey 2009-01-05 . chapter 8
that was a good ending... a really good one, i like how it all was wrapped up!
101spacemonkey 2009-01-05 . chapter 7
aw, i guess i was expecting something more dramatic, but its still good, that song, isnt it by chris tomlin or something?
101spacemonkey 2009-01-05 . chapter 6
she is so going to mess with ryans head, right?
101spacemonkey 2009-01-05 . chapter 5
eek frank was nabbed!

“guess who the first agent on the scene of Franks death was.”

that wee bit near gave me heart failure, i thought i had missed a huge chunk, this isnt a giveaway as to whats coming next is it?
101spacemonkey 2009-01-05 . chapter 4
will it be ryan or ben who gets nabbed? please be ryan ,just out of evil-ness...
101spacemonkey 2009-01-05 . chapter 3
i love it! this killer is so going to come after ryan! mwhaha
101spacemonkey 2009-01-05 . chapter 2
more information revealed, is the killer going to come after ryan? sounds like a plan!
101spacemonkey 2009-01-05 . chapter 1
there were a few errors, but meh, i do that all the time as well, i can't wait to see were this goes...
aweena 2007-08-18 . chapter 8
That was such a sweet story! I was going through some Ryan stories and I found this, and it was so nice. Bie! :0D
Samwelshdragon 2007-03-22 . chapter 8
loved the story
Nyra Lion 2007-01-10 . chapter 8
wow that was so asome! what a cool story. i love it. :)!
ebony fly 2006-12-14 . chapter 8
I hope you know that this sotry is just completely awesome. ^_^
kitsune 2006-11-08 . chapter 8
This was awesome. There really was no other way to put it.

I loved it. ^_^

Keep writing!
csiwolfe08 2006-07-25 . chapter 8
Aww, I liked it. I liked how Ryan and Calleigh ended up together in the end too. Great job!
AIOFanNCRM 2006-07-25 . chapter 8
That was really sweet in the end. I liked the story. Love, Maudy.
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