This is well-written but I noticed that you omitted one of the RP characters. It just doesn't feel like a true Rat Patrol story to me without all 4 of the guys.

Another dandy. You've got these characters down beautifully. I feel like you're perfectly in Moffit's head and character in particular. I just watched this episode so your story was a perfect follow-up. Reading that letter of Troy's, though, had me wondering if any of it would pass the censors!

Great epilogue for 'The Kill or Be Killed Raid', and a nice look at what the guys do when they're recovering from a mission.

"That's blackmail, Troy!" Moffitt protested.

I hear him saying that in exactly the same tone of voice he used when Colonel Schweiger was 'spoiling the tea'.

Syl-- I love the way you melded the episode with your story. Your dialog and portrayal of the characters in their actions and letter is very 'right-on'. I really enjoy the banter between Moffitt and Troy. The series just didn't give us enough of this. Great job!