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| MordeMe 2007-03-25 ch 1,  | abuseLovely and poetic and complex and smooth. The description of everyone's ties to Cloud and to each other were really great. I also especially love the little side stories included in the bigger picture; like Yuffie in battle gear swearing loyalty to Cloud. Everything was really well written! |
| foxygirlchan 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abuseDeep. Very! Love it! As I love almost all your stories (some I haven't read yet...) Great great AWESOME. Your stories always make me get into them. It's four in the morning too... -can't pry herself away- Yuffie... So they all live with Yuffie for a few years then on the Highwind? Aye, I can imagine that none of them expected to survive. Who would (except Yuffie, because she's Yuffie). I can imagine all of them living together and everything. Setting up shop. Man, so many things could happen at the end of FFVII it's scary. -shivers- I didn't like how Yuffie has a bastard child though. You never say who the father was (or did you?). I can't really find it. Ah, I don't like the idea into seeing the future enough to see more children, but I guess I can live with it. It might bother me because they're OCs (in a sense). O: Great job! I just noticed... This is Vincent's POV isn't it? XD;; They will all live forever. Very, very touching story. I love it! -can't stop loving it- Best part ever. Yuffie kneeling to Cloud. They all love Cloud... Yes... I can see that. Yuffie in a spastic way, is another way to put it. XD |