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Good story, but I think you could make it longer, and make it harder for Mamo-baka to get Usagi back...I liked it though!

Great!

Ali-Chan...Couldn't Marcus have been the father? It would have made the story more interesting and hurtful for Mamoru because he dumped Usagi for dreams!

Peace, Love, and Hatred...Ja

Star-chan

Vary good but there were a lot of miss spelled words

Man! You made it MamoruXUsagi.

I thought that it would be a Marcus and Serena Romance, Oh well..

A disappointed

Sailor Star

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what yu mean that you didn't let haruka kill him drats

I want to know the DREAM! *dries* so pretty.. *cries* I LOVED THE HARUKA THING! RUKA AND USAGI ROCKS! - my fav senshi can't ya tell - very nicely written. Just add a little more detail to the end. We would like to know the dream as well Lil Ali-chan -, ja ne!

Love,

Jessica

Wow! this was great. Very touching. Please write a sequel.

I liked it!

luv it!

Aw... that was SO AMAZINGLY SWEET! That's exactly how I dreamed of that kind of story, you know? she's kinda mean, and heartless at teh beginning, but then in the end... happily ever after! Whoa... totally kewl! I really loved it, and I hope you'll write more! I'm sorry this review is short, but let me tell you...it' sso amazing I can't decribe it into words! Hope you'll forgive me for my lack of vocab! _ ttata, you talented author... cha! ja ne! aqua

Totally Kawaii! Wait until Chibi-usa finds out that she has an older sister!lol

Very sweet.