Well, your off to a good start, I think. You should really write more to a first chapter before you post it. Why can't 'bright' wizards have balls? *tee hee hee* balls. okay, sorry. I tend to ramble when I review

Even though it was a joke, I'd still like to see what happens next. It's very interesting!

Actually, now I'm wanting more of _this_ story too! lol

That was really good! You should finish it I want to know what happens!