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| Pagan-Angel13 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was interesting. Hope you plan to continue it, I'd like to see where you take it. |
| atruwriter 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is a very interesting job!! I hope it's a Christina/Brian story! Do update soon! I'd love to see what else you have in store! |
| omegia 2006-06-21 ch 1, | abuseCome on you HAVE to continue! |
| Wolf Jade 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abusePlease say you're going to continue this? It would be horrible not too and if you plan to continue that was a horrible cliffy. And one other thing, there was a slight mistake, the only one I managed to see. "He reached for something behind his back and seconds later she felt something cold, round and metallic pressed against." You forgot to put in what the gun was pressed against. But other then that there were no other mistakes spelling or grammar wise. Please keep up the wonderful work and please update this... |
| iluvroadrunner 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abuseyou can't just end it there!?!?!?!? sorry, i'm a huge peluso/finn shipper. they're adorable. but write more! i want to know what happened. Emily |
| AntisocialButterfly13 2006-06-16 ch 1, | abuseThis sounds interesting!! Update soon!! |
| N. Halifax 2006-06-16 ch 1, | abuseWOW! update! |
| JuJuBeezzz 2006-06-14 ch 1, | abuse*gasp* please update soon! This is a great first chapter! |
| AC 2006-06-14 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was an awesome start. I can't wait to see what happens. I love the Christina/Brian pairing. Please cont. soon. |
| raylie 2006-06-10 ch 1, anon. | abusehey, where is the rest? this is a very interesting start but you really need to continue it!! |
| BBGROOVE 2006-06-10 ch 1, | abuseplease continue...I really love this pairing...atleast i think it's the pairing that i like...i only know them by their last names...but just continue anyways...lol...rose for uo @- |
| JennCorinthos 2006-06-09 ch 1, | abuseOMG... I hope Cristina is o.k... Brian is going to go crazy... Can not wait for the next chapter... |