love it

you so need to finish this story! i love it! if you need any help for a story email me so we can brainstorm.

#1: I think it migt help not to underline the authers note
#2:i would be in ravenclaw

nice

lol sorry bout all the update soons lol well bye

thorn

hahhaahahahahahashahahahaha lol omg thati s so funn6y i can totaly see that happenign(omg wow i never did get the benift of having there be movie of harry potter befor now i get it{it makes all the paradies alot mor belevable lol}) well ok now my sides hurt frum laughing so muchlol

your #1 fan
thorn
(update soon)

lol so it is the same time it was yesterrday(ok ok fine im not pacent enuf to wait 3 minsits realy5:42) lol any way i am so proud yesterday i read 25 chapter and today i finisherd that story and i read 20 chapters of this one so thank u and agin if u ever get stuk with a story i will give u an idea(ok well u will mostlikly have to let me read the story but...) ok well i've decided to pull an alnighter so im off to read in my room for anhalf hour then im going for a runlol that is silly running at 6:15 (hum maybe i can convince the summer school buss driver to take me home hummlol well bye

your #1 fan,
thorn

YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER YOU SHOULD GO PRO!
PLEASE KEEP ME POSTED:):)

okay so i`d like to point out a few things.

-Harry doesn`t know about the room of requirement until 5th year,
-Dobby isn`t a house elf in his second year,
-the chamber of secrets isn`t open until halloween,
and -how could Malfoy know that Gina is Harry`s sister when it`s only the first night and she was introduced to the school as Ms. Evans?

the story is really good
but i had to point out a few small mistakes
other than that i really like it so far.

HOLY CRAP ok im sorry i didnt even finish reading like the first paragraph but like i freaked out because you used my EXACT birthdate which i think i really weird in a cool way...it was sept. 1st, 1992 (just like the story...lol)! so yeah, i just had to say that. haha.

hey, sorry about the long wait my ma deleted the file accidentally so if you have copies of it so I don't have something already in the story put twice that'd be great thaks!

~Serenity

Aww, it can't be the end already! They just got back, and Fred and Gina might go out sometime! :( Well... if this is the only way you could finish... could ya make a sequel? Please? ;D

Wait - I reviewed chapter 28 with an idea but it's not shown up on your reviews page. Did you get it? The sugar quill one? I wasn't sure because the bertie bott's every-flavour beans idea was sort of similar. If not then the idea was for Gina to hex a sugar quill and Fred sucks in a McGonagall's class and turns into some kind of animal...I think I said a giant gebil or something.
Don't end on this chapter... I mean, you could leave it for a while and come back to it when you have more ideas. I'm glad you like my ideas! I'll try to think of some more...

1) The girls send an anoymous love letter to Fred pretending to be some secret admirer asking to meet him in the Charms classroom after dark. Then they could send another 'love-letter' to a really unattractive girl like Millicent Bulstrode, so she goes to the Charms classroon too - and then Gina and Ginny could lock the door on them so they're STUCK in there together!

2) Charming the floor of the corridor right in front of the twins just as they're walking along so that the floor goes all gooey and soft like sinking sand - and they get stuck in the floor...maybe they could fall over trying to get their feet out of the soft floor and end up sinking through the floor entirely and dropping into the classroom below covered from head to foot in soft gooey floor-stone...stuff.

3)The twins could get back at the girls by disguising themselves with Polyjuice potion, turning into McGonagall and Dumbledore and stop them in the corridor and tell them they've got detention for some reason (sorry can't think of a reason) and then assign them a really nasty detention like cleaning al of the toilets in the castle - and so Ginny and Gina go and clean the toilets. But then the real McGonagall and Dumbledore could meet the Polyjuiced Fred and George and know that there's a trick - so when the potion wears off and the twins are found out, they get into really deep trouble. So the war is sort of won on both sides.

If I think of anything else by the next time you post, I'll tell you in the review! Thanks for crediting me by the way :^) It was no problem!

Oh sad it's over. But I love the story. I hope you get out another idea soon.

Um. . .*thinks about this one* I have no idea. Mischievious Brutes? I don't know. I'm retarded. -.-