I liked this story! It's weird, but I kinda enjoy suicide fics. You should have made a sequel though. You know, someone finding him like one of the brotherhood or Magneto or somethin'.

Well, either way, it was very good and well written.
Keep it up!

Gah that was good! I want a sequel! haha :0)

I really love the discriptive language you used here. At first, I thought you meant Toad...Please keep this going!

i love it countine ! please

Ohh, this was really good. I was confused as to who it was untill the end. You should really continue this story. ^_^ Good luck.

fantastic start, unbelievable, can't wait to see who walks in on him, please update very soon.