I REALLY liked the story!

Can't be too funny to be buried alive...

“I don’t know, Joe. Doesn’t tickling your little brother until he dies of laughter count as fun?”

I think I like this story allready;)

OMG That story was amazing! I actually broke down when I thought Joe was dead! You did an amazing job on this story! It was just...indescribable! It really was spectacular, I was grinning like a fool when Joe was alive! I have to agree with Frank about those people though; they are beyond insane! That was a horrible thing to do to them and a little too extreme! That drug is terrible! Do you know if it's even real? That would be so scary! And I would go crazy if i woke up in a coffin that was buried! That was a truly fantastic story! Great great job!

*sniff* That made tears come to my eyes...*sniff*

oh man you made me cry that was so cool and sad at the same time you published any books? lol

this is so awesome!

This was a very nice story, but there is one thing to critisize. Wouldn't Joe have suffecated inside the coffin? Other than that it was a very good story!

Hey Brilliant story. Really well written. Could you please email me and tell me about the time that buried alive event really happened. It sounds so cool. I have never heard of anything like that before.

My email is

Thanks.

I loved your story!

HI! Aw, it's over. I'm so glad that Joe's okay. Frank is always looking out for him. It's kind of sweet how they've always got each other's backs. Maybe that's why they make such a great detective team when solving all those cases. Anyway, real nice ending. I'm gald it all worked out for Frank and Joe. Well, good luck with your other stories and I'll catch ya later. Ciao! ^_^

I've really liked this. Your characters are well developed and feel 'right' - just as they should.

Loved the line in Chapt.10 about Joe being excellent at giving the bad guys "grief".(Frank's no slouch either, but Joe truly excels)

One niggling litle nitpick, however. Don't you think it more likely that Frank would have heard Joe's weakened and oxygen-starved tapping if the Hardy family had used a Mausoleum slot or tomb, rather than through 6feet of dirt?

Hey I've read your story at least three times and I really love it. One of the reasons I'm reviewing is because I saw you had 99 reviews and I just felt like I needed to give you that number 100. You diserve it.

We! A happy ending. I read about that before too in this scary book. The guy ended up dying anyway. _" JOE DIDNT DIE! WOO HOO! Lolz. Love your story.

Your so nice. Made me cry. TT_TT Lolz. Very good up to this part. =D