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jxr1 2008-07-11 ch 16, anon.	abuseThis was a very nice story, but there is one thing to critisize. Wouldn't Joe have suffecated inside the coffin? Other than that it was a very good story!
Mad Irish girl 2008-06-24 ch 15, anon.	abuseHey Brilliant story. Really well written. Could you please email me and tell me about the time that buried alive event really happened. It sounds so cool. I have never heard of anything like that before. My email is Thanks.
Guest 2007-06-27 ch 16, anon.	abuseI loved your story!
Russa 2007-06-22 ch 16,	abuseHI! Aw, it's over. I'm so glad that Joe's okay. Frank is always looking out for him. It's kind of sweet how they've always got each other's backs. Maybe that's why they make such a great detective team when solving all those cases. Anyway, real nice ending. I'm gald it all worked out for Frank and Joe. Well, good luck with your other stories and I'll catch ya later. Ciao! ^_^
a shy boojum 2007-05-30 ch 14, anon.	abuseI've really liked this. Your characters are well developed and feel 'right' - just as they should. Loved the line in Chapt.10 about Joe being excellent at giving the bad guys "grief".(Frank's no slouch either, but Joe truly excels) One niggling litle nitpick, however. Don't you think it more likely that Frank would have heard Joe's weakened and oxygen-starved tapping if the Hardy family had used a Mausoleum slot or tomb, rather than through 6feet of dirt?
justdoyourthing 2007-04-11 ch 14,	abuseHey I've read your story at least three times and I really love it. One of the reasons I'm reviewing is because I saw you had 99 reviews and I just felt like I needed to give you that number 100. You diserve it.
ShinigamixGirl 2007-03-17 ch 16,	abuseWe! A happy ending. I read about that before too in this scary book. The guy ended up dying anyway. >__>" JOE DIDNT DIE! WOO HOO! Lolz. Love your story.
ShinigamixGirl 2007-03-17 ch 13,	abuseYour so nice. Made me cry. TT_TT Lolz. Very good up to this part. =D
Jen711 2007-03-09 ch 16,	abuseSorry it took me so long, but I finnaly got around to finnishing this! Really awesome story, I enjoyed reading it =D ~jen
whitetigers 2007-03-03 ch 1,	abuseThat was a great story. Alittle slow at first but boy did it pick up. You are doing very well in capturing the attention. I knew there was a reason Joe came back from the "dead", and not just "he's alive again." You are smart enough to know that, so i waited for a good enough explaination and you gave it. Again, great story and am looking forward to more.
The Silent Rumble 2007-02-25 ch 16,	abuseWhat am I thinking? I almost said, "Please update soon." Good story! I loved it and the plot!
Beautiful-Crying-Angel 2007-02-25 ch 16,	abuseAwesome ending chapter! Although I was wondering when you'd update :-P Emblamed...Creepy to think about! shudders Hoping to read more of your work. B.C.A
Russa 2006-10-21 ch 15,	abuseHi! Sorry, I took so long in reviewing. For the longest time, my computer would only show me half the chapter. I hate it when that happens. Anyway, this is getting exciting. Joe really had me worried there for awhile. I really thought he was dead. Quite the surrpise when he started knocking on the coffin lid. Reminds me of an episode of Buffy the Vampire Slayer, when Buffy scraficed herself. Her friends revived her but she was a still stuck in the coffin and had to dig herself out. She was wandering around the city in a starled trauma for awhile. Anyway, it was a good thing that Frank, Biff, and Chet went there when they did. Now Joe is alave. Yay! I wonder why Angel tried to kill Joe in the first place. Maybe Black put her up to it, in case the rollarcoaster thing failed. Well, at last now they're both in jail. Good job! I'm looking forward to see how this raps up. Cya then! ^_^
The Silent Rumble 2006-09-14 ch 15,	abuseI'd like to know. Sorry I haven't reviewed before this, I tried and it wouldn't let me (I think I was at SId's house).
Jen711 2006-09-11 ch 15,	abuseMe again! I'm glad things are winding down and getting better. =D Update soon. I love your HB stories, so you should write more!

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