I like the story and the direction it's taking. I'm guessing someone's pregnant? ;) But you should probably find a beta. Some parts are a little hard to get through grammatically.

I think I might know where you are going with the story :) and I like it. Anyway I can't wait for an update.

An interesting idea. I think it could use a little more of a build up in between Maria meeting Danny and what is happening now. Though it is very out of character. I'm interested to see where you take this story.

Had to re-read the begining, and can't wait to read more! I really really hope Maria isn't having an affair with Danny. *worried*

This is interesting, but byfar, i don't really understand it.

This is intriguing. I want to find out what happens. Please update?!?

Oh is getting good! j'adore!! PLEASE update soon!!

I like it so far good start! and shakspear101 shouldn't you be working on YOUR story you know the one that won't let me sleep because I am dying to know what will happen? just kidding anywho update both stories!

Great Story! I have one question. Please dont let Georg get hurt?!?!?!?!?! Thanks but great job so far