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twilight.clique.avalon
2008-04-25 . chapter 4
oh its definitely wonderful. update soon
JusT LooKing ArounD
2006-12-02 . chapter 4
oh, please UPDATE!

This is too good to be left unattended!
crazy-girl1988
2006-10-10 . chapter 4
I like it! It's cute.
Please update soon.
seiha
2006-10-06 . chapter 4
please update soon! i luv it soo much!
I.N.V
2006-07-19 . chapter 4
i love this story!! XD!! i want to know wht happens next please keep going!.
RofRuri
2006-07-18 . chapter 4
hello¡¡

deina let me tell you that your fic is just lovely (sorry cant find other words think that awesome or amazing are too used )

dont think that Im retarded or something but cant find why yamato start to be cold on mimi in the festival , its because mimi starts to move her hand and he thinks that she dont want that ?

hope you answer my dumb question, but still I think my fav chapter is the 4 one , specially the moment that yamato blush when mimi come in her kawai kimono thats kind of cute

I think this is too long jijiji sorry for that continue pliss hope more yama/mimi moments

good luck ¡ sayonara¡
PaochiCute
2006-07-02 . chapter 4
Update please! Things are getting more and more interesting...
"Even though I've just fallen out of love, I'm still happy.
That's because Yamato is with me."
This is deep...does Mimi even know what she's saying? Omg, I think they're starting to fall for each other...but they dont knnow it yet.
PLEASE UPDATE!
PaochiCute
2006-07-02 . chapter 2
Man, those two don't know what they're getting themselves into...For some reason, both of them will realize that they do like each other...right?
PaochiCute
2006-07-02 . chapter 1
I love how Matt and Mimi interact with each other...they never seem to agree on one thing, they always seem to argue whenever they see each other...and of course, in the end, they will eventually get to like each other and, mayber, fall in love...?
hehehee...
WishUponADotDotDot
2006-06-27 . chapter 4
Aww...so sad. T-T
Keep writing!!
Mimatoforever
2006-06-26 . chapter 4
it was good i hope u continue to update quickley
KIMI
2006-06-25 . chapter 4
i agree with Phiso. your description of her emotions really added more to this chapter compared to the others (and i understand what you mean about rushing and have to nix the description to get chapters uploaded). i'm loving the work so far. :)

for the boy in mimi's flashback, matt would be a great candidate. :3 they could have been childhood sweethearts for all my mind is wandering off to~ BUT you still haven't talked much about their pasts..

why is sora so afraid of tai? how did mimi and matt's arguments come about (i know the teacher, but it seems a little confusing).

please continue. :) i can't wait for your future updates!
Phiso
2006-06-24 . chapter 4
Ooh I really liked this chapter. I like how she thinks she's the only one who feels weird, the only one who wonders and blushes and feels funny...The way you wrote her makes me empathize with her easily.

As for Yamato...blasted boys! They're so hard to read! I hope something happens that makes him feel bad for hurting her. >.
Aya Kurayami
2006-06-23 . chapter 4
..
Augh..
NO!!
COME BACKK!
mimato25cutielicious
2006-06-23 . chapter 4
wow!it hurts u know haha...well hope you update soon and more mimato wuhoo!>..
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